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sylvelle chapter 48 . 2/2/2018 zAs long as they have protection |
sylvelle chapter 40 . 2/1/2018 Did the doc ever look at the lab results the tech put in Ians record? Did I miss it |
sylvelle chapter 41 . 2/1/2018 zSo Janet begins to realize how badly she acted toward Ian. good |
sylvelle chapter 24 . 2/1/2018 Plesase fix this soon;*( |
sylvelle chapter 21 . 2/1/2018 speechless how dare she |
sylvelle chapter 20 . 2/1/2018 A very bad idea. I hope you don't do something to mess up the perfect evening. I am not worried about Ian you and Cassie I'm not so sure about. :/ Tricia |
sylvelle chapter 9 . 2/1/2018 I am glad Janet didn't hurt Ian again. I would begin to wonder about her professionalism. Verbal abuse only as long as it isn't emotional. Other than that I Janet is pretty much as I remember from the show. I'm very glad you saved her. Thanks for sharing. Tricia |
Harmne chapter 8 . 5/27/2010 I have a question - something that just occured to me in my marathon re-reading of your Campers! stories. Ian and Shawn are alternate forms of the name John, aren't they? Was Shawn's name intentional since Jack's 'real' name is Jonathan? Oh, and just as an aside...I'd kill to get my hands on one of those 'memory books' from that first year at camp! |
Harmne chapter 20 . 2/1/2010 Poor innocent Ian! He has no idea what devious Cassandra has plotted! |
Harmne chapter 13 . 2/1/2010 Maybe Cassie requested the tux. After all, if Ian wore a dress uniform he'd definitely stick out and get LOTS of attention at a high school dance. Which he would hate - and maybe Cassie would, too, since everyone would want to find out about him and she wouldn't have as much of his attention. And he'd get cranky! |
Harmne chapter 1 . 2/1/2010 LOL, I'm glad that *SOMEONE* has finally figured out that it's bad luck for SG1 to say that! Forgot to review the last story, about Dotty and James' death. I bawled all through those chapters - do you know how hard it is to read when you're crying? I liked how everyone dealt with it though. Jack was wonderful. And Ian showed a remarkable amount of restraint, doing what he felt was necessary without getting caught OR losing his temper and killing the ssh0le anyway. Great job. |
FORD B chapter 48 . 7/5/2009 Wonderful read! I did expect Ian to annoy Jack with the old man thing, but seeing he is under the command of Jack, I guess that would be out of line. I'd do it though. |
Shadows-of-Realm chapter 48 . 4/22/2009 “You said I could have whatever I want…” Ian smiled, softly. “Are you sure…?” She nodded. He shook his head, wondering for the millionth time what it was she saw in him, and kissed her again. A hungry kiss that made it quite clear to her that she wasn’t alone in her desires. They broke apart only when they absolutely had to to breathe, and Ian took her hand and led her out of the kitchen. "Crazy woman…" Yah! It all worked out! |
CedarPineSpruce chapter 2 . 10/26/2007 Another P.S. ~ Do you know how wonderful it is to finish this story knowing that the next is 72,0 words? 72 *thousand*. And there are more stories after that one. I am completely spoiled now. |
CedarPineSpruce chapter 1 . 10/26/2007 I appreciated how realistically Ian and Cassandra were portrayed. Ian was mature and acted so. And, like you commented in your author's note, girls can be immature and naive, and can also be the aggressors. It is so refreshing to read a story that defies so many clichés. |