That was awesome and really cute! Great job!

Haku's just a kid and Zabuza had to realize it at some point. I like how he cares but pretends not to! They are the ultimate disgruntled family!

Oh man.

These stories depress me and make me happy at the same time.

Wonderful. ]

Blessed be,

Angel

beautifully done, especially the imagery and detail for writing it.

aw...so cute! :D

Oh god, I'm such a crybaby~ This story is so touching, and so full of emotion~ ;-;

Heartrending and exquisite. You captured Haku and Zabusa's relationship perfectly. Plus, your writing style was very confident and sure. You painted clear images without overcompensating.

I had a little trouble with the scene transitions, as they were not marked. But other than that, I think I can safely say this is one of my favorite fics on this site. Great job.

Wow.. that was really good! I almost cried at the end... You're a wonderful author, and you kept Haku and Zabuza in character for the most part! _ Yey!

aw...is cute

Kawaii!

Aw... How adorable. _ you captured the characters well. I love the ending! Good job, keep i t up! _~

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That was very nice and lovely and very believable to fit in cannon. I like how you fleshed them out and made them 3-D and left out any slash .

I like Zabusa in this position and Haku too. It was an awesome fic. Good job.

~ Uozumi

aw! That was so cute!

Admit it, Zabuza-san, you care!

Oh, how perfectly unemotionally emotion. Perfect and so rarely caught with those two. Thank you very much for taking the time to write a story such as this. I REALLY enjoyed it.

Aww. .

That fanfiction really made my day, and it especially made me smile at the end.