So good! Wish I could have read what seto's letter said. It would have been that much more powerful I think.

That was an amazing story. Definatly the best written i have read (including published books). You are even better than so many of the writers out there. Please continue to write because you are amazing at it. ;)

now this is
my kind of story

This story was so cute! XD I just loved it so much! It was so funny reading the thoughts of Joey, and how his mind works :P some of the things he said were so stupid it made you smile in that sympathetic 'you're such an idiot sometimes' way, and i loved that! You did an excellent job on this story i really enjoyed reading it :D

-thanx-for-da-energy

PWUAHAHAHA, that was funny. Loved the pun "Well, it seems that Joey Wheeler is finally coming out of the closet.” Neary choked on my coke when I read that. Great work :'Db

Wow, that was a really gods story

Normally I dislike stories that jhave some of the plot elements you used but you managed to pull tem off exceedingly

Spectacular job _

keep up the great work

The last line of the story... *hearts it*

Very well done, and cute.

Yes, Joey needs a bit of thanking for his part in this whole thing. I loved it! I was ready to call it quits for the night when I saw this fic and just had to read it. So cute, and chapter four nearly had me in tears for poor Joey, and I don't cry. Seto is everything Joey said and thought about him, though lol. Anyway great fic!

The story was cute, but what really fascinated me was the style of writing. It held all the drama of a teenager but combined it with the contemplative tone of a philosopher. Odd but interesting.

This story was brillant, I absolutely loved it. But I truly can't believe... You ended it that way! Hey! I WANT MORE!

Alana: OMG the horrors Joey-chan had to put up with oh but he's so cute when scared!

Evo: Heh or blushing

Absolutely wonderful. ;)

That was such a detailed story! I don't think Joey could learn a few of those words, but it served the purpose wonderfully! Who does know what goes on in his head? I loved that story, and I was so involved in it...I felt the sadness, terror, and shock...then happiness. It was awesome!

Okay, I just read through the whole story (yay for me!), so now I'm going to review it.

First off, I just loved Setos comment when Joey fell out the closet! Hilarious! He has such good comebacks, that coldhearted snob!(who we all love) And I loved how you wrote from Joeys point of view, and never going over to Setos, because that would ruin everything. Then you would know FOR SURE if Seto liked Joey back or not. Instead, you did it this way, and the mystic was there.

Though I have to confess I found Joeys choice of words very... well, they were too smart for him. It's not really the way he talks. But I wasn't bothered by it, just something I picked up (I also make that mistake at times). What do I know, perhaps it was intentional of you, to show that Joey isn't as stupid as people think (which I have to agree on in that case, I think he just haven't got the motivation or anything similar to be 'school smart').

And the ending... aww... So right. And I agree, it wouldn't have been the same without the angst you gave in. I liked how he was hiding under the bed, in all his misery, and Kaiba just sat on it and said "Well, that’s about all the information I’ll be needing from you. Thank you, Wheeler, you’ve been most helpful" after Joey confessed his love! So very Kaiba-like! I thought through the chapter "Please, author, don't make Seto out of character!" And you didn't! I am so glad! :D

Though I do want to know what Kaiba had written! I am too curious for my own good...

This story made me so full of yaoi joy! :D

wow

that

wuz

FUCKING AWESOME!

that wuz so cool there r no words to describe it

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