Why are most young so sad and disanchanted?

It's well written, but too sad for me. Please smile. :-)

I am new here and there is so much to read :-)

I have read 'Circle of Death', and I like it. Shadow and Xero, remember me Tymo and Drak from AM. It's perhaps because youboth like the same music. ;-)

Great! Just read them all! Personally I prefer the ones written by TheShadow. :-)

Sorry, but I think a couple of the first ones sound a bit too much like Evanescence (which is no probs, as I'm their fan as well!) Anyway, I should keep my mouth shut because I can't write a single line of poetry so the song bits in my stories are always taken from the singers I listen to. Great work.

Sofia x

Pretty poem. You have done great work for all 14 chapters

Very nice the three of them

Great first one, tears in my eyes.

*blush* glad I could inspire you somewhat. I can see a faint connection and by itself it is great

Not a fan of the first but second one was pretty good

Intresting poems. Not your best but still good

The second one is heart breaking, the first one touching with romance

Love both the poems!

Very good poem about Aribeth.

Not so good about Delphie but till touching

the "What, what" comment was made by ~Xero coming out of a Jag Panzer comatose. He was listening to "Starlight's Fury" and was supposed to tell me that arrowmaker's story was called "Fate's Poisonous Kiss" but instead said, "What! What?", moron. I've scalded him and he can't listen to heavy metal for a week. Laterz.

LOL! I never thought of those. Thank you! _

Romantic first one. Really liked

Loved the second one. Most of it could describe people like Jude, Desther or some "evil" thing. Really loved it

the first one is one that I failed to understand what he meant. Just didn't touch me but it was written well

the second one is worrying in its way. Its words are scary...in a good way