Reviews for What You Weren't Expecting
AlwaysMovingForward chapter 3 . 4/23/2019
Please continue this
scifijoe chapter 3 . 4/10/2016
This was an interesting story. The premise was different than most. However, it has been ten years since the last update, one can assume that you abandoned the story. That is too bad.
Lilithofthenight chapter 3 . 5/10/2015
NOOOO! WHERE IS THE REST!?
froger495 chapter 3 . 7/24/2012
nice
Raiatea1 chapter 3 . 4/2/2011
It's sad you give it up. I mean, this story is very original from all the stories about 'Kigo'.

Some things are predicable from what you write... Like, I can see Kim witness the relationship between Ron and Felix. I can almost feel some freak out from her situation with Shego (she had feelings about the girl but didn't expect them be reciprocate), and Ron's situation with Felix...

But, then, a child can mess up words 'like/love' seems the same for some. The way she act with Kim is also cute. She seems to really want a friend but she's 'evil' with the tweebs, as if she want to show them who's the boss (lol). But, She's Shego, so it's not really unexpected, like her dislike about blue guy or Ron.

I'm glad that Monique is undestanding with that... But, in my messing mind, I can't help but imagine her with Bonnie...

Well... If you update, good! If you don't, the world won't end. It's up to you. I will just keep my eyes for a while. After all, I discover your story via another autor's favorite stories. 'cause you don't pairing these two, I didn't know you wrote one. Otherwise, I would already send you a little piece of my mind!...

Bye!
blackbirdglass chapter 3 . 2/25/2011
u 2 r 22 funy LOL seriou5ly tho gud story o & i like Rin bestest lol bestest
Khaled.63 chapter 3 . 9/6/2010
please please please continue your story i love it very much
stevielicous chapter 3 . 12/19/2009
aw ;d
ReadingWolf chapter 3 . 11/29/2009
aw! young shego sounds like a cutie and a bit of a trouble maker lol. plz update soon
grrr chapter 3 . 7/23/2009
what? No update? YOu cant do this! Its such a good story!-tear-
Six-string Samurai chapter 3 . 12/14/2008
It'd be great to see this continued.
momomago chapter 3 . 10/20/2008
oh, that was so funny! it's just adorable!

ow! cute little shego!

jeje poor kim, and i don't want to be near shego if she keeps this memories .

well, i would love to read some more so...

please keep going?
Shinsei Tonbo chapter 3 . 6/30/2008
wah, this is cute please continue
firelarc chapter 3 . 6/13/2008
nice work so far. i love the whole i hate evil blue dummy head! priceless. keep updating.
EpIcKiGo chapter 3 . 5/17/2008
WO-O! WHAT AN AWESOME STORY! as kim would say 'YOU ROCK' i cant wait for an update so DO IT SON since u havnt update this in ages! how could u! -wails like an infant- lol

Your loyal and way to hyper reviewer and hopefully friend! BEASTY BEX!
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