Wait so where's the continuation to this chapter?

This is one of the most unsatisfying stories I've ever read. It kept me interested enough to read all of the available chapters but I was angry throughout most of it.

I'm angry because of the decisions TK made. I'm angry because of how Davis bulldozed his way into Kari's heart. I'm angry because the author couldn't decide whether to make it Takari or Daikari so it ends up being captivating enough but annoying.

As a Takari fan, the feelings of unfairness and injustice dragged on far too long. I couldn't handle it well. This is more of a story for Daikari fans really. (A boy who gets a seemingly impossible girl.) Where the story was heading and how TK was portrayed, I couldn't imagine him doing a u-turn on his ideals and confess to Kari. It wouldn't be right to rob Davis of his happiness (even though I detested the way he got them.)

I've thought about other ways the story could end as Takari but they feel forced. You've ended up writing a Daikari fic and it should end as one if you ever feel like finishing this ill-conceived story.

Don't get me wrong, some of my favourite romance stories are tragically exquisite. This isn't one of them. There was too much bleakness for me to handle.

I'm really sorry that I keep making commenting mistakes (I am new to this site) but I realized after I sent in the comment a second time that I wasn't signed in sorry. :(

sorry i posted my comment in the wrong chapter. Takeru's and Yamato's father's name is "Hiroaki Ishida" again sorry about the miss-post ;)

his father's name is Hiroaki Ishida

I love this but rather upset there won't be a chapter 7. Not dissapointed because this is worth wild!

AHH!NO part 7!

Man! I'm not even haf way through and this is really good!

i like the story, but i'm not satisfied if it must end on chapter 6 (promises and oaths)..,
is this really the end of the story?

I found your story 2 years ago whilst browsing through various Takari fanfictions. When I came across this one, I thouht it would be one of those rather cheerful story of Takari. But I was wrong. The expressions you put into this story is too...I don't know what it is, but it's so convincing. I couldn't feel any of the happiness Daisuke felt because I officially despise him. However, every feeling Takeru had had could be felt going through my heart. I appreciate your work and I hope to see it finished.

I WANT IT TO BE TAKARI

Hi! This is the first fanfic I've started reading and after a couple of them I have to say this is my absolutely favourite romance story out of all the other digimon fanfics! I beg you please to continue this story...I'm sure most of us would want to see what happens next and how it ends :) PLEASE UPDATEEEE PLEASEEEE

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so when is the next chapter out? I'm curious of what happens next...This chapter really wants to make you know the rest sooooo badly

woa! no sabes! me en canto esta historia, al principió la leí porque buscaba algo en particular, pero me pareció interesante y la terminé de leer...por favor, continuala!

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hey~it's me, again! listen all you takari(takari rules!) fans and to all you BAKA daikari fan, takari is the most cutest couples in the whole digimon series! I don't even want to know why or how you managed to think takari is bullshit and daikari is so totally cute(yeah right..) but I just want to say that there are more takari fans than daikari fans so back off!

now, back to the real business, takari fans, I am going to write the next chapter of this story but it is only on my computer because I don't want to sign up on this website.I am going to make it a takari and daisuke is going to be a little devlish so takari fans, no hard feelings but you guys can't read of you could try making a story too..i know it's fun although i never done it before...well, that's , and writer, if you ever read this, just know that i will PERSONALLY HATE YOU FOR THE REST OF YOUR MISERABLE LIFE if you make this story into a daikari...

p.s: i'm not really that mean so let what i said go.