| Reviews for Watashi no mi Sakura: My beautiful Cherry Blossom |
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   Undertheskys chapter 12 . 12/9/2015 love it |
| waterpixey930 chapter 1 . 10/15/2015 IT IS AWESOME |
| Sakuran181 chapter 12 . 9/1/2013 Author, you're pretty amazed! I love your story much! Hope to read your new stories! |
| Chalky chapter 12 . 3/20/2012 One of the best fanfic I ever read |
| Silver mad moon chapter 1 . 12/29/2011 REALLY GOOD! |
| Ariauna chapter 12 . 8/6/2011 love it |
| Limeru chapter 9 . 8/4/2011 Hi. This will be a long one. But please bear with me. I hope you take this as a good advice for your future reference in creating a new story. Your story and plot is quite good. But youn have a problem in developing your story to achieve your desired plot. And you also have some problem in consistency and redundancy. In some of your chapter Sakura and Syaoran talk about how her brother teased her by calling her "kaiju", but then in another chapter when that is brought up by Tomoyo Syaoran looks like he doesn't know about it. And another one in some early chapter Syaoran talk about how his father died when he was only 2 years old to Sakura to let her know that he knows how it felt to have one of your parents gone. But then again in the latter chapter they talk aboout it again when Syaoran was soothing Sakura and telling her baout his family. There's still more I won't mentioned anymore. But I think this 2 is the most obvious one and really ruined this for me. I don't know how you made this mistake. Maybe you're not tracking how your story goes or you're too busy to track how your story is progressing to do so because your too busy on other stories you are writing. But if you want to be a good writter you have to know and keep in mind the progress of your story so you won't mixed up some of your story line like you did in this one. And you have some grammar and spelling problem here and there. Please take this message as constructive critism and don't get mad at me. I know you have written this for a while now. But I still hope this will help you in whatever story you are writting now. |
| pikachu2510 chapter 12 . 1/29/2011 wah i dun get is in the earlier chapter (i believe it was ch. 3) Syaoran told Sakura that he had 4 sisters n said that his father died (not sure if thas in the same ch.) buh later on in the story she didnt knoe that o.O... not sure if u made a mistake there or if i juss read rong ;p... anywayz i found this story sooo cute xP... especially the part where Syaoran gets soft on Sakura ;p... anywayz great story! D ~*pika*~ |
| Tommy-yomz chapter 12 . 12/22/2010 Great story but I felt bad for Keiko a little... Anyways, Keep up the good work... |
| Princessblue97 chapter 12 . 6/3/2010 Love this story... It's a great plot... Thanks... |
| dfadfdf chapter 1 . 1/25/2010 nice chapter for an opening.. |
| Nadeshiko95 chapter 12 . 12/8/2009 Aw that was so adorable! But don't you need a certain degree in college to degree? But you said Sakura only graduated one year earlier than the rest. So that part sort of confused me. |
| arataz chapter 1 . 8/20/2009 this is really nice also finish your love and war |
| Joy Ly chapter 12 . 8/18/2009 The ending was so KAWAII! :) KEEP UP THE GOOD WRITING!:) The phrase 'Watashi no mi Sakura' Meaning My beautiful Cherry Blossom is cute!1 |
| mitsuki1346 chapter 12 . 6/24/2009 oh! THAT WAS SO KAWAII! I LOVED IT! SO SWEET SUCH A HAPPY ENDING! MAN I LOVED IT! oh wow *blushes and clears throat* right sorry great story *blushes more and runs away * Ja-ne! |
