Sque! That was too cute for words! I love Bright's adoration of Futch, and also that sweet bit where he scoops up Bright in his arms. And I had to giggle when you described Futch's 'brilliant imagination'in naming pets...seemed that Bright was on the receiving end of it as well.

I also love how the 'pretty boy attack' came to be...heheh, poor Futch and Sasuke, having to be at the brunt of Luc's sarcasm.

Yeah, we're gonna have to have that talk about what "mediocre" means. P

I really like Futch's difficulty in getting over the past, here, and especially appreciate that Millie isn't just a mindless ditz; the little nods to everyday castle life just served to flesh out the story, I thought. Nice touches, and nice overall. _

hey nice one. makes me laugh and smile but I didn't quite much felt angsty but felt proud over Futch and yeah, Millie is actually a great magician and she's really smart only, she have this youthful thingy. She's only 14 as far as I know...or was it 13?

nice. i like how it is orhanized. i also like that it is well based in the game, develops undeveloped aspects, and makes perfect sense.

great

This is a very nice, believable story. You seem to have Futch down pat in this one, and I completely believe the relationship he had with Bright in the story. Thanks for bringing a little S2 to the Suikoden section.

Futch! I really like the way you explain how he felt about Black and Bright. This is an awesome fic. I'm so glad people still write Suikoden 2 fics.

You did a great job with Futch's conflict - I found him perfectly in character :) So was Millie - I could easily see her saying what she did, since she loves her own pet so much.