Reviews for By a Nose
Nemrut chapter 5 . 10/14/2010
Even if it was a majorly OOC Hinata, I like a strong Hinata with a spine.
Snwh122 chapter 5 . 6/29/2010
Wonderful! I'm a little disappointed that this story doesn't have as many reviews as it deserves. I know you took a lot of it from a play, but the plot and understory was exceptional. Your writing and word choices were spectacular as well )

In short, amazing Job, I loved it!
Missmybcmiyuki chapter 5 . 4/28/2009
such a great story with unexpected moments.

just too great for words. i love naruto and hinata's personalities. here.

i especially love how naruto was actually quite smart in this story. and in a way hinata was the clueless one.
The Mute Bard chapter 5 . 2/9/2008
It's getting to the point that I don't think I need to tell you how great of a writer you are, but I am doing it anyway. Excellent. This is storytelling on a great scale, even if it is based off of plays and anime.
Nikkolite chapter 5 . 1/26/2008
Aw...

EK!

...

Well, awesome job!
Tlatempa chapter 5 . 9/19/2007
I'm not familiar with the original story, so I can't tell what parts came from it. But this was great! Seeing Hinata all tough yet sweet, and Naruto inteligent and respected... what a story!

I think some of the letters would have been worthwhile writing out to express Hinata's feelings, even though they are laid out within other parts of the story. Thank you I enjoyed this.
city with no people chapter 4 . 3/21/2007
w00t! MY GUESS WAS SOO RIGHT!

-calms down from sudden outburst-

man, that's genius, making Hinata Cyreno...that fits so well.

LOVE IT!
Blue-shine-angel chapter 5 . 11/28/2006
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
TheLastChronicler chapter 5 . 10/21/2006
Excellent, one of the best fics I've ever read. A sequel would be a dream come true.
ShanniC chapter 4 . 7/31/2006
All the world's a stage and we are players. You really like Shakespeare huh? I liked this Cyrano play much better than the Midsummer night's Dream. Nicely done. You know, I believe you are the most prolific Naruhina writer on this site if I am not mistaken. :)
Federico17 chapter 1 . 4/25/2006
You know whats fuuny? Im acting watching the movie of what your fic is based on in french class! I forgot what the movie was called but yeah thought i would just say that.
Andrius chapter 1 . 1/13/2006
Great story, though it has unusual atmosphere for Naruto's world. And completely different Hinata was a bit strange too.
vic chapter 5 . 1/12/2006
nice ending for a wonderful remake
treepresident chapter 5 . 1/7/2006
lmfao... i never saw this story before... very nice though
mythril dust chapter 5 . 1/4/2006
That must have been some emotional rollercoaster for Hinata. I could identify the original work behind part of this story. The whole plot was very well planned out, though it was a bit hard picturing Hinata that much OOC in the first chapter.

Having Apate was a spy was a very good twist. Since this was the second time I read this story, I could take my time to notice the subtle hints you left out. Very sneaky of you... :)

The epilougue, on the other hand, was new to me. Hinata's reaction after finding out the truth didn't sound very realistic. Seing how much she had changed, I expected her to slap him hard and only then smother him with kisses. Go, girl!

I think no word less that 'great' could qualify this fic. Keep showering us, the fanfic readers, with your talent.
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