This is simply adorable! XD
I love how the story reads. It flows very neatly from one thing to the next one

unusual fic, but i like it.
could see it happening as read it!

I love this, it was adorable.

lol

Hee hee... Seph your lucky your not so small and you never had to deal with shit like that... poor cloudy... although Seph, I will say this, the glare that you are fame for might have saved you even if you were like cloud. Oh well it was a thought...

This... is just... priceless XD

Awww, poor Cloud :3 I loved this - I just couldn't stop grinning.

Aw man. This is going down in history as one of the funniest, non-pornographic fanfics ever. Thanks.

"Music is like water. It is something that must flow."
MT36

lol that is so cute!

I don't understand why two SOLDIERs couldn't have just peeled the locker door off. :

Precious and priceless. Cloud is a little gem. Zack is a delicious pie, and Sephiroth is a tall glass of cool, cool water.

This fic is great! How cloud was saying he was going to die and to at least dress him b4 some1 saw him! And I would never trust Zack with any type of weapon! Lol. You need more chapters in this!

AHAHAHAHAHAHA! Oh goodness, I think my cheeks are going to cramp from grinning so much. This is by far, THE BEST, fanfic I've read in a while (even with me avoiding homework by browsing fanfics all night). Freaking awesome. love love love love love 3 Poor little Cloud is adorable and Zack and Seph are so amusing (is it weird to find their characters' humor sexy?). I kept thinking, 'I wish I could spend my friday nights with them' the whole time while reading this. Awesome job!

I did NOT see that one coming! Haha, it was great.

Loved this :3