| Reviews for Child of the Earth |
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The Last One chapter 9 . 6/25 YESSSS |
MysticRising chapter 4 . 6/12/2019 Wow this is good. It fixes sakura up while keeping her canon traits true. Naruto was VERY persistent to her, but here naruto appeases to her intelligence to make her see LOGICALLY, something sasuke seems to have stolen from her. Sasuke is still kinda a prick, and that's one reason why i hate sakura with him. He has done nothing to earn that love. It's like she kept that stupid fangirl crush after all these years. Here we see sakura grow up and you basically fixed her greatest character flaw, obsession with sasuke and how it blinds her. Anyways, ignoring my rant, i also love this naruto who maintains canon mirth and cherriness while also showing his intelligence (canon naruto was smart too. Think about it, rasengan, kage no bushin, summoning jutsu, these are high lvl techniques he got pretty quickly. I bet other reasons, lik depression or sabotage, prevented him from reaching his full potential like by applying to his academics. |
CallMeHiromi chapter 9 . 12/21/2017 IT HAS BEEN 10 YEARS, AUTHOR PREPARE TO FACE ETERNAL PUNISHMENT |
CallMeHiromi chapter 5 . 12/21/2017 This fanfic is amazing. The characters are, well, in-character, Naruto is at the level expected for someone training with Jiraya for a long time, there are just the right moments of character development, the grammar and spelling are on point, and Naruto isn't an ABSOLUTE GOD. You, the author, made sure to include things that Naruto struggles in, and you enunciate his problems and how he faces them. Naruto is, by no means, a 'Mary Sue.' There are no plot holes, or issues so far, and you, author, explain what you did in the chapters and why you did it. And the foxes. The foxes are the true heroes of this story. Ramen is the main character. |
dude fuck you chapter 1 . 10/22/2017 him having a normal life is shit and done already him living in the wild would have made a good story not the shit you wright... |
Biggus Dickuss chapter 8 . 5/26/2017 I'm laughing |
Mcmuffins chapter 4 . 5/26/2017 It good |
Mcmuffins chapter 1 . 5/26/2017 I like it. |
Guest chapter 9 . 5/24/2017 I thought it was to be continued ;-; |
Guest chapter 2 . 2/27/2017 *gasp* A Naruto that doesn't know what Ramen is; It's a nightmare |
SorceressEternityIII chapter 9 . 2/17/2017 Wow, the story hasn't been updated in so long! Hope you're still alive! I like the story so far and wish there was more. I don't mind the OOC part because it's a different story from cannon, so one little (or in this case, major) change can affect everything. |
JustADamFrenchFry chapter 9 . 1/8/2017 No! I'm so mad you haven't updated in forever! This has great potential! You can't abandon this beautiful work of art! GRAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! This story has a great plot! There's good character development and I can see lots more in the future! This story has the potential to be absolutely amazing and I'd hate for it to go to waste! If you don't want to continue it, you could put it up for adoption. You said it's to be continued! Don't lie! You may not have absolutely loved this chapter, but that just means making the next one even better! Improve your work page by page, that's the experience writers have when they create! They do better the more they write! Please! |
Someone chapter 9 . 8/16/2016 Where is the rest of the story |
Guest chapter 9 . 6/23/2016 Good story. You're probably not gonna update, but it was fun while it lasted (: I enjoyed it. |
Guest chapter 9 . 3/21/2016 tbh this whole ordeal of you not updating since 2007 is disrespectful lmfaooo |