The ending brought me to tears. Although many of the parts of the story were a little cliche I found myself enjoying it greatly. This might have been written 13 years ago, but thank you for writing it.

I'm revisiting this after years and it still made me cry. It's wonderfully written and will always be in my favorites

I have never cried harder at this end than at my grandpa's funeral. This was a beautifully crafted fanfic and im so happy i got to read this.(:

HOW THE FUCK WAS THIS YOUR FIRST FANFICTION

I'm crying. I'm actually fucking crying over a fanfiction, and a bloody deathshipping one no less!

I'm a freaking tendershipper for goodness sakes and you have me crying over Mariku and Ryou godsdamnit all. I used to be a thiefshipper way back when, but I got converted and now I can't see fanart or read fanfiction about thiefshipping or deathshipping because I want the pairings to be around the other way. Normally. But you had me sighing and fangirling and crying over this.

Fuck it all.

You write far too well, alright? I've never seen anyone who can get all four of them spot on but you can. Bakura was perfect, Marik was perfect, Malik was perfect, Ryou was perfect. Their characters were absolutely outstanding, even if I did want to cry over the relationships between the yami's and hikari's.

I swear, the rest of the time I'd have run for the hills but I'm crying over fucking deathshipping. I haven't cried over fanfiction in at least a year. And it's deathshipping. Bloody hell. I apologize for the swearing but I can't believe that I'm balling my eyes out over deathshipping! And a fanfiction that had song lyrics in it! I usually hate so many things that you did but your godsdamned writing has done things to me and now I'm freaking crying

It's going to be really weird having this in my favourites but there's no way in hell I can not favourite this. I'm probably going to end up favouriting you as well, after reading every piece of fanfiction of yours. Hopefully you have a lot, because it's really wonderful to find someone who can not only write well but get these four so perfectly in character.

Where are the freaking tissues

Loved it! :)

I absolutely adore this fanfiction 3 seriously. I roleplay as a Ryou on facebook who is engaged to a Mariku, and this fanfic has really inspired me. It makes deathshipping practically canon! not to mention that I love pocahontas too, and the song at the end... you made me cry! it was so beautiful!

I HAD TO LOG IN TO FOREVER FAVORITE THIS STORY ;A;

ASJKDGBH;NSMDK IT'S SO BEAUTIFUL.

... too lazy to log in xD

S-SO CUTE. SOOOO CUTE.

grrrr! not the foretold chapter!...buutt...there is a sequel! *squeals* So much 3...no! not that dirty kind!well yeah but i mean the heart! i hope that bakura gets nicer...on to read the next! amazing btw!

Yes I'm reviewing 7 years after the last update hehe.

I decided to reread it, and... I guess I just forgot how beautiful this fic is.

I read the last chapter while listening to If I Never Knew You (good Pocahontas reference btw!) and um... I guess it was the worst decision ever.

I'M CRYING NOW

I'M NOT EVEN KIDDING

OH GOD

THIS FIC

PLUS THE SONG

ARE JUST SO BEAUTIFUL TOGETHER

(breathes in) So yeah. Whilst reading the whole fic, I have experienced chest pains and tears... IT'S ALL YOUR FAULT. WHY DID YOU HAVE TO WRITE SOMETHING SO MAGNIFICENT.

GOOD JOB ON YOUR TALENT (continues to sob)

Also, according to the last chapter of part 2, you said that it's not the end?

WHY DID YOU LEAVE US HANGING!

why did you have to end like this?why(cry)you've split them appart,and after i've start to like this-the ending sucks-!

Ugh, I feel like such a baby. I knew this was coming though as soon as I saw that it was following the Battle City plot. It still hit me pretty hard. Like a few have said before, the 'One last dance' line REALLY got to me. ;A; I still really like this fic though. 333

Wowww... I love your fic... (Yes, I know that it's a little older, and maybe you don't think anymore on fanfics...) Never Knew is one of my most favorite stories, I made this account for can review fics, but I use to read fics from years ago, so I read a lot of yuugiou fiction, and because of it I appreciate your fic, and the fact that you respected the anime storyline.

I think that soon I'll start the second part of this fic (it's the better thing about search for the older fics, that you can select only complete fics).

3 this is one of the few MarikuxRyou storys I like- no- LOVE D!

explicit lemon copy please? 3