I sense some drunken shenanigans in the future 8D

Very well done! You really held the suspense. I loved the confusion and miscommunication. Great job :)

Whats with the reviews?Twenty? This story is so beautiful that it brought tears to my eyes...mentally.

Thanks for writing this masterpiece for us :)

well that was interesting very interesting indeed ;)

This was very good. But, did you have to leave it like that? I want more mush! Please! At least could you add more to the one on your other website? Please.

Why the hell does this story only have seventeen reviews? It deserves SO much more! Your fic is flawlessly and beautifully written. The characters are true to themselves, and that is a feat few of us manage to do.

I hope you are proud of yourself for this fanfiction, cause it truly is wonderful and it has been my pleasure to read it!

Keep going, you've got some serious talent! :)

Later!

Littlerosebud

Thrilling. 3

WOW...just WOW!...

last chapter was so...intense and so WOW!...

great story 5 stars *

WOW!

ya know, i wonder why i only see 14 reviews hmm ? well make the that 15...it is worth a LOT more... i love it, really, you did a good job on this one. thank you ! hope you keep on writing LOTR' fictions,

good luck XD

an Cheers X3

I felt it was right to review everything I read. You are talented-your stories weave a spell, and I cannot help but read non-stop until the very end. Despite whatever flaws others point out, your greatest strength lies in characterization. I really enjoy reading the dialogue between the characters, both major and minor. Also, I commend the fact that you didn't portray Gimli as only a laughing stock, but you show his wisdom as a confidant and friend-something a lot of writers who include Gimli tend not to do.

aww so sweet...in a disturbing sort of way...

Would you belived if I say I loved it? The best scens were surely waiting for Legolas (! chapter and epilog) and 'I just want to see Leoglas' and 'I cannot'. Loved them all and loved whole fic. _

Average amount of semen, one teaspoon

(from 0.3 to 15 mL) And diet affects

the "taste".

is staffed by medical

doctors to answer health questions. Put in

"anal sex" to search and you may find the

only article I've found that gives statistics:

25% of male-male couples NEVER (repeat,

NEVER) have anal sex. Touching alone

produces male orgasm. A lot neater and

more aesthetic or spiritual than anal sex.

50% have done it at least once;

25% do it often.

The anus is designed to allow feces,

the offal, the excrement, bowel movement,

the poo, doo-doo, or

whatever you call it, to exit the body.

If kept inside, this amalgam of bacteria

and decayed matter would quickly make

people seriously ill.

The anus is NOT a vagina. It has NO

lubrication of its own. A wet finger

won't help; indeed, if that finger then

enters the mouth, diarrhea will result,

whether from some exotic bacteria or

virus or from plain old Escherichia

coli.

People who engage in anal sex follow some

rules (usually after drinking alcohol).

One-the receiver must control the speed

and degree of penetration.

Two-an enormous amount of lubrication

must be used.

Three-there are 2 round muscles just

inside the anus. These sphincters are meant

to keep feces inside during working hours.

(Some anal sex participants eventually

develop fecal incontinence.) They are tight,

but can be loosened with lubrication and

lots of time and patience.

I had hoped your story would end with the

usual male orgasm and not promise anal

sex.

Anal sex is dangerous because the

skin of the intestine is fragile, thin,

and can be broken with force. Even if the

break (fissure) is near the anus, it is

painful and can become infected. Anal sex

is the easiest way to catch nearly all of

man's most deadly diseases. An erect penis

is a formidable weapon, large in size when

engorged (they all end up the same size

when erect despite their original flaccid

size). If the skin of the intestine is

torn, it can be life threatening and

excruciating as bowel enters the abdomen

(peritoneal cavity).

Did you know that with prison rape, 96% or

more of the perpetrators are heterosexual?

It is a thing of power over another being.

Rape is all about power.

Hope this helps.

I can't remember if I have mentioned this

before, but it is imperative that

NO fluid be placed in an unresponsive

person's mouth...it will enter the LUNGS,

not the stomach.

The reason is, a small flap of tissue

separates the two tubes that are side

by side, one leading to the stomach,

(the esophagus)

the one in front (the windpipe)

leading to the lungs. This flap of

tissue only works properly when a

person is alert and responsive.

Even then, it is quite common for

people to inadvertently inhale while

trying to swallow and thus choke.

PLEASE-do not have any characters

try to "replace fluid lost" in this

manner. It is sad, but fluid cannot

be replaced unless a person is

conscious enough to drink for themselves.

(Ergo, until recently, people who

were in comas just became dehydrated.)

Ask your doctor to verify this.

I wouldn't be so fervent in this request

except for the fear that some reader

might take this as true and practice

it on some helpless person with

disastrous results.

Otherwise, the story is well written,

holds one's attention, makes the

reader eager to read more and in addition

is easy to read (some stories are

impossible to follow the story line

but yours flows easily from start

to finish).

I absolutly love this story. Your writing style and how you wrote the characters were great.