It is a great shame that this story has not been completed. It is 12 years since it was updated, can I adopt it?

This story has had a great start and shows better promise, keep writing, do your best. A lot of Authors 'forget' Dobby and his abilities. It would help Harry and Hermione if you had them realise that he was free and could help them with Harry's room and food.

really enjoyed your story so far and hope you decide to carry it on as i would love to see how it progresses

this was good, more please, want to see how the date went with Hermione.

monbade

This is an excellent story that seems to have ended far too soon. I hope someday you will return to it and finish the journey.

But thank you for what you have written.

"You'll be staying in a jail cell."

I would love to be in that courtroom.

'Your Honor, my nephew moved the couch while we were on vacation. I want him convicted of theft!'

'Mr Dursley, am I to understand you let your underage nephew alone in your dwelling while you went on vacation?'

rofl

I do hope you haven't given up on this as it is a very good story, and it's just getting VERY interesting!

I like it. what happens next? update please.

Good stuff so far.

Well i got to say i really really loved this chapter quite abit and i cant wait for more!

Its longer and i like that and i love how things are going with Harry and Hermione, i like how Sirius adopted harry hehehehe, im not sure about that whole Glass sphears and what not but i cant wait to find out so keep it up and update soon please!

O she totally fancied him!

LoL i love the word Fancied.

Starting to enjoy this more kil dumbledore and have ron slip on abanana pill and die while going down the dungrons of gringots and ill be a happy camper!

Oh and kill snape and draco please

OH PLEASE LET THEM WAKE UP IN A COMPERMISING POSSESESTION!

Ah ok chap, you should put this and the last chapter in one there too short for my taste but its good, boring so far but good.

All that you have writen could be fit in 2 chapters at most so it feels like im just finally getting done withh the second

This is were ya went wrong man, this whole Im in love with him omg why didnt i see it wait i did but never said athing thing has been done more then i can freaking count not to mention this stuff is annoying.

Build the relationship up as you would a normal one, a quick i love you shit sucks balls man.

Now as to Dumbles i hate him!

Ron i hate him!

Molly she annoys the living day lights out of me and im beginning to hate her aswell.

Now on another note who the fuck cares what that bitch Molly thinks, Harry nor Hermione are her children and shee needs to stay the fuck out, deal with your own kids.

Im getting tired again so imgoing to go read abit more and lazy around.