There's a tbc at the end but it has been 6 urs already! Pray and tell me u have forgotten?

I like this story. I don't know If this comment is helpful or not, But I would like you to know i'm enjoying this story alot. :)

Ha ha, hot chocolate from your reviewers!

*grabs copy of "Prince Caspian"* Ooh, I thought He said Peter and Susan were too old. He only said they were /getting/ too old! And Susan certainly didn't grow up, eh? Aunt Polly said that.

I'm glad this is still a work-in-progress. This is terrific - and, as you say, there's plenty of room for good Narnia fanfics. Thank you for writing it. Note to self: some time I must write a Narnia fic - when I'm not so busy. ;)

Faerthurin / Theophilus

*reads in triumph*

One error, though: In "The Magician's Nephew" it states that the second son of King Frank and Queen Helen became king of Archenland. It's just a brief mention, easy to miss.

Faerthurin / Theophilus

The fact that Narnian and Archenlandish royalty address each other as "cousin" backs up my theory that it's early times. That ruin Susan arrived through must have fallen down completely by the Golden Age.

I'm so glad Susan's coming to her senses!

Trying to figure this out before I read it all - has she arrived before her own reign? Aslan didn't seem to do that to the Englanders, but the way no-one recognizes her name... and the knowledge of the early history of Narnia, which was lost in the reign of the White Witch...

Good story so far, and written with no spelling or gramattical mistakes yet, which is more than you can say for most fan-fic writers.

oh please update again soon! i know it has been a while, but a story that get over 130 reviews should at least have a conclusion! DONE LEAVE US HERE PLEASE!

Oh I'm so glad the thingie let me review! This was such and interesting one. I enjoy different versons of the "What happened to susan." Story. this one is very interesting so far.

Any chance of an update?

Hey I've had this on my faves for a while but I just never got around to reviewing. I don't like to review the really good stories normally cause I can never give good critiques for those like I can for the really bad ones! I wanted to tell you I loved this though. It was a neat idea and really well written. Plus I also read what you wrote at the end asking for recs and I can't recommend a lot of good fic like the ones you asked for but there are a couple I've read. I know Francienyc wrote about Caspian and Ramandu's daughter and she's a great author, plus there's a wip called Sea of GoldenSand about Susan going to Calormen with a little bit of the Northern Giants mixed in that's really good so far by Andi Horton. There's one called Thole about Pter and the giants too and it's really good. I hope that helps! And again, great story!

Tibby

I really like this story so far. I think it could be really interesting to see what Susan ends up doing when she's back in England (if she goes back). But I really think this needs to be finished. I don't know if you'll ever check to see who's left you a review, because the last time you updated was in '05. But I do know that writing more if you get the chance would please many people.

I like reading, love reading on the Internet, and ADORE reading about Narnia, so I read fanfiction pieces as much as I can. When I come across something as creative and as well-written as this, I BEG the authors to hurry up and finish writing so I can finish reading.

Keep up the good work!

Hey there,

I really love your story because it is so different from usual Susanfic and it is very well written. Please write the next chapter soon!

Interesting story. I'm a bit curious to see where it will go. (if there are more parts)

OOh! sousan went back in time! ..is that possible i thought they just traveled parallel to our world. i guess anyhitng possible! I loved your katie series. alot! the information was incredible. i never knew fanfiction required so much research! -i must find all those books mentioned.-

i hope you update soon! and i think i need to reread narnia!