Reviews for Shattered Innocence |
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![]() ![]() Ah fuck you really got me good on this one. My heart dropped when I read you didn’t update this fic but I’m so glad you finished it. It was a perfect ending and I’m SCREAMING INSIDE. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Veema, I read a couple of your stories and I am glad you came back to finish this story. It showed in your verses and clear writing and how the last chapter unfolded that you wrote it 6 years later. Your writing and story telling skills really improved! It was amazing story. I squealed at the ending. ( I rarely do... heh) So nicely done, just the teasing without really getting too much into it. So absolutely fun and gets the readers thinking of all the possibilities of those two playing out their personalities. I wish their would have been at least a one shot sequel but I guess I'll let my imagination run wild with assumptions. Again! Great story, well developped characters and incredible job on the last chapter! |
![]() ![]() That last part tho... completely gone me |
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![]() ![]() i lvd it so so mch.. made me cry .. emotions ..feelings ..i cud feel .. bt at last it ws a swt endng.. |
![]() ![]() ![]() All I can say is BRILLIANT! |
![]() ![]() You did perfict and great they had a happy ever after I wanna read some of your novals LOVE your stories |
![]() ![]() ![]() hi; sesshomaruandrin . blogspot . com sesshomauandkagura . blogspot . com |
![]() ![]() ![]() I think I would like to write a fanfiction about this fanfiction is that ok? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ficou muito bom, sua escrita é maravilhosa, abraços |
![]() ![]() ![]() Que babaca, eu no lugar dela já teria ido embora a muito tempo, ela deveria se tornar logo um demônio de vez, mas continuar sendo boa, e ela deveria esquecer o Sesshoumaru, ele foi tão idiota de deixar ela no lado de fora, do que adianta ser um lord se ele não tem o bom senso de reconhecer cada criatura. |
![]() ![]() Bravo! That was incredible! One of the best fanfics I've ever read! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved the story, I was sad because you finished the story, a great author. Please make season telling him about the couple's romance sesshy and rin and its evolution. kissus |