Sasuke is the one that wouldn't become chuunin because he's a traitor. they would NOT have stopped Naruto. He deserves to become Chuunin.

Wow, this is some really deep thinking from naruto. The way he views them is so possessive.

nice

Awesome

I'm a little confused about when this is set, I'm guessing it has to be before Sasuke makes a break for it?

Aw, I love Naruto's animalistic mind in this :D

Aw Sakura can hurt him but not in the way that she oft attempts to :3

Oh, so it's after Sasuke tries to leave...

Aw, he feels so bad about lying to them... :(

This is was pretty epic look into Naruto's feelings so well done :D

Very nice. XD

I love the perspective.

Poor Naru-chan *feeds him a cookie* Good job! *gives Asuka a piece of cake*

Interesting introspection. It also puts their plan to enter the chuunin exams and become chuunin before Sakura gives birth into a new perspective.

LOVED IT! OMG YOU ROCK!

I'm faving awfully much today... Oh well, I guess it's not my fault.

This is very well written.

I liked Naruto's introspectivness, but I was confused... where is he? Are they on a mission sleeping together... or is he in Sakura's house... or what? I was a little lost on where he actually was - although I liked his view of his teammates.

I love how he's so protective of them.

dude, i read teamwork without even knowing there was a prequel. now i wish i had read this first

[smiles] This is really good. And deep. Love it.

[goes off to read Teamwork]