cool

This story must be continued.

I wonder...how does one go about joining these dark icon writers anyway? I wouldn't mind helping out with this story...(I'm working on my fist Love Hina fic right now but have been writing other stories for 3 years)

please hurry up with next chapter

i thought it was good so far keep up the updates.

abandoned?

This story has an odd premise. It skews away from canon rather severely yet remains a fairly good story. I like the interaction between Tsuruko and Keitaro. It is very sweet. That Keitaro was able to nearly match, I have a feeling he was holding back, with Motoko means he's improved a great deal.

I very much have enjoyed this so far,

brindani

Cool story. A very entertaining read.

bigbabidi

Your story is very luck in the near future and I look forward for the next chapter.

its an interesting fic, I hope you update soon

Wow, what a great story, and it leaves me wanting more. Write more when you have the time, please.

This is a great story with a wonderful premise.

I just finished reading this interesting story an hour ago while hunting for LH Fics, and I am pleased to say that this story is excellent reading.

This story would be an even greater story if it was updated a bit more regularly, as I see that it has not been for a long period of time.

So from a faithful reader of almost every Dark Icon writers stories, I humbly ask if you could spare some time to continue with this story.

Much appreciated.

Steve. :D

Oh master of mayhem death and destuction. I salute you. This fic rules! The way you wrote the story (wheather before chap 4 or after) is awsome. I can't wait until you update. Thanks for the great story. :)

one very clever, or not so much, the whole god's cry and devil's laugh. and the motoko love with her heart thing i feel is a bit ooc

hi

the fic is really good...

by the way where is kanako?

can kanako get in the middle of Keitaro and Tsuruko?

better... can kanako do something with keitaro?

good luck and please update soon