This was a beautifully crafted story, Larbo. I really wish this is what Spider-Man 3 actually was because you managed to interweave so alot of threads from Spider-Man and Spider-Man 2 in a way that just made the story feel cohesive and especially unique.

One of my biggest issues in Spider-Man 3 (the actual movie) was the unnecessary love triangle between Peter, MJ, and Gwen, along with through Harry into that mix as well. Venom being in the last 10 minutes when he really should've been saved for a sequel. While I did think Sandman's story was nice in the actual movie I do feel it could've been handled better.

Anyway, I love how you were able to build upon from where Spider-Man 2 had ended when it came to Harry Osborn portrayal as the Green Goblin. That's what the primary story should've focused on, and you succeeded in telling that story. I'm also very impressed with how you managed to interweave the symbiote storyline alongside the story of Harry Osborn/Green Goblin as the main antagonist. Then, we cut to the relationship between Peter Parker and MJ here. This is how you do a love story after getting both Pete and MJ together at the end of Spider-Man 2. I love that they are both trying to be there for one another and giving support that's what I felt was missing from Spider-Man 3, and I said you did an excellent job on that side the story as well. Finally, we reach the ending of the story which was perfect I don't think there was any other way you could've end this story then the way you did here. There was a theme of forgiveness when it came to to the ending, and it was done well. Also the tease at the end with Venom is just amazing.

Like I said before, I absolutely loved this story and will always remember it.

This was a great movie script, and I agree in that I liked this better than the actual Spider Man 3. There was a great use of previous scenes and extending on characters that added to its depth. I was reading the reposted version, but the scenes in Act 3 were all mixed up, so I switched to here. You might want to fix that, because it seriously detracted from my enjoyment of reading it. Keep writing!

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BUNNY

Wonderful writing.

I honestly hope that if the official writers do decide to

base their plot on concepts that vaguely resemble your story

arc, they are able to breath half as much life into the main

characters as you did.

Your story was engrossing and enjoyable. Well done!

You should have submitted this to whomever was in charge of getting the actual movie script together, because this is superior to what actually went on screen.

I loved MJ coming into her own, Harry being a true hero in the end and surviving, the emotional journeys Harry and Peter took, and the little touches that weren't overdone, like the girl with the balloon. I'm not quite clear on why there was such an extreme manhunt for Spiderman, nor why that changed, but compared to the plot contrivances in the film, that's mild. Your plot was definitely much more solid without the symbiote just happening to land near Peter and Bernard randomly announcing that he has, n fact, stood by and watched Harry tear his life apart for years without mentioning that he knew that Peter didn't kill Norman, but, hey, might as well break the silence at one random time when Peter and MJ are in danger, as opposed to all the other times he apparently knew Harry was actively going ot try to kill Peter.

So, good job. I'm glad I found this, and I really would prefer for this to be cannon as opposed to the actual movie.

wow...this is so cool! love it! even though ur an agist meanie :p

The movie dialogues tend to be unbearably cheesy…yours are awesome. You were really good at keeping in the true screenplay format, and your version of Spider-Man 3 contains an excellent plot straight from the comics. What else is there to say?

Ah yes, how about this: WRITE SPIDER-MAN 4.

Er...but perhaps I’m getting ahead of myself…

Great job! You have done a wonderful job of adapting the comic into a successful movie. I could seriously picture this as the real deal. Great job!

Oh, this is amazing! This should be the next Spiderman 3 movie! Did you submit it anywhere?

DUDE!

That was so freakin' brilliant I may explode with the brilliance of it. Please, please, PLEASE write Spiderman 4.

Excellent. Pure genius in every way possible. Two thumbs up. 10/10. Ok, I'm done.

Really nice job by the way! :)

Wow, this is an incredible fic. I love it. I don't have time to finish Act 3 right now but i'll finish it later... You should seriously try selling this to whatever movie company made Spiderman, you might be able to make some money!

Oh my...

I'm stunned, honestly stunned...

Have you considered going to the actual guys who make the movie and presenting this?

If I were you, I would, cuz this is GENIUS!

Holy crap! ok, this was amazing. did you look off a comic book or the script itself? write a freak load more, would you! i'm the biggst spiderman obsessor of any female i know. please...write quickly and lots of spiderman pretty things. i love the way you work w/ words and not use the same adjectives too often. can MJ and peter be a little more emotional towards eachother...it's so cute when spiderman weakens under her touch...she's his precious.. awe...it's so cute!

laterz

luvs

keep writing!

Tanis Ryuu

This was a very well written Spider-Man 3 movie storyline. I can only hope they use this for the actual Spider-Man 3 movie, but I had one complaint, where was Stan Lee? He had a small roll in each Marvel movie, maybe I didn't see him there, well, hopefully you're working on Spider-Man 4, if not, get to it! I want to see how it continues (or ends, if that'll be the case). Good Luck.

I. LOVE. IT.

Sequel! Sequel!