Just pointing out that in the second to last line Lily calls him Harry instead of Neville.

Oh my gosh I'm crying. And I want to just keep on crying. Wonderful story and I know that there has to be a price... if everything went perfectly that would be boring. But I'm just mourning for them.

Amazing. This story is amazing. I love it so much. I know this review sounds stupid but I just wanted you to know that this story is so good. Thank you. So much.
boASHoks

I would love a happier ending. This was very good but so sad. I actually sobbed, not something I usually do. Thank you so much for writing this and I look forward to reading the sequel. May your muse stay with you.

NOOOOOOOOOOOOO. i cant believe severus died! great story tho.

I have tears in my eyes!Heartbreaking story.

I cant believe Harry! He doesnt seem to miss Severus at all! I liked your story, but I wish Sev didnt dye.

good story!

omg i am literally crying! i cant believe you killed him! how rude!...but i will read the sequal and hope to god that he comes back to life...

I really liked this story, except the ending...I hoped snape would come back some how...

aha just spoted a/n at the end *sheepish grin* must be going blind...

me:hey who turned the lights off

matt:what do you mean the lights are on?

ok very strang bout of role play there but hay it is 1:30 in the morning never a good time for me to write i become less lucid by the second :S

any way good work (again) cant wait for sequle! please please Daughter Moon bring sev back to life i cant live with out him *drops dead*

hem hem i would just like to raise an issue here . . . on the hpfandom you said there was going to be an alternate ending i was just wondering why you have not raised it here? wel apart from that on over all good pice of work however i did feel that you rushed the end and lets face it the begining and end are the most important parts (with the minor detail that the middle has every thing in it but then i'm saying that every part is important that now i look over my words i see they are so i should shut up) anyho good work and if you do write the alternat ending i'm looking forward to it as i like happy endingd with sev and harry together :)

Oh come on I want the happier ending! :P gr... I hate sad, but angst I like. I hate ending it on sad notes... :(

:')

Good Job.

Shadow

Bah Hahahahahaha! I love referring to Harry as Dumbledore's newest project! hahahaha. That's gotta be my favorite dynamic in the whole of the Harry Potter books, other than Severus/Harry or Sirius/Harry father/son fics. Sev/Harry ought to be father and son, not biologically but adoptively. Sirius though, he's good, but honestly, he doesn't have the skill to give Harry what he needs. Remus does though. I like these lovable gits! ;)

:)

Shadow

Really enjoyed the story, even with the sad ending. I was VERY upset you killed off Severus. It was good though.