Hey. You've been an awesome reviewer so I wanted to repay you :) I love this. It's so sweet. It was a little hard to read because of the format and everything but it was really good. Good job! Gen. xx

This is great! Really sweet. The song worked well. Really good ending!

just checking it

good try for a first time fan fic. but it was a little confusing and everything was moving too fast. you should try to put it in a different format like in the early part of your story...

"What is going on?"

"Well, why don't you tell me Theresa?"

"I don't know what you're talking about."

something like that. but remember to include their names occasionally so we know who's talking. good luck and i hope to hear more from you! )

Great story so far!

Great fic, I hope that you will write more Ryrissa romance soon.

This is a really good fanfic! You are an awesome writer! I just think that you should format it differently, like when they're talking it should be like:

Ryan: blah blah blah

Marissa: blah blah blah

Ryan: blah blah blah...

You get it, that would make it so much easier to read and so much more understandable. But it's just a suggestion! I can't wait to see where you're going with this! Keep up the great writing!