I am loving this story

Hi, I really really love the story because I have felt the love and sweetness coming from Harry and Hermione, I just wanted to thank you for writing this story because I'm a die hard fan of them both, but no offense, I really don't like the ending because I thought I would be hearing hermione's voice again together with Harry and Him seeing her again, wrapping each other's hand, kissing her again in another world because he have never seen her for a long time, and that is just what we want in the ending, I just wanted their hearts together. T.Y

il n'y a que des visions?
je n'aime pas les harry passifs, pourquoi ne pas lui mettre une laisse?

Did you take down your sequel? I can't find it here or on

if you want the moon on a lease. lol, i imagined harry renting the moon for hermione. kind of killed the moment. seriously, spell check.

also, i don't think most people would consider lightning a whole other element. i respect that you're trying to put a twist on the whole elemental thing and that kind of mythology, which has been done before, but it doesn't ring true when lightning gets a seperate category (which is a stretch for an element, could probably be filed under fire), but water and ice are combined. and why shadow, and not earth? i'll keep reading!

The young girl hid her face in the crotch of her father's neck. I think you mean crook, don't you? Hope that was a typo

Not a bad start, though very confusing at the end.

Lots and lots of spellng mistakes and missing wouds throughout.

3/5

You did a very good job of setting the scene at the beginning of the story as to the state of Harry's mind and how he got that way.

Well, This story was good, i started off a little slow but it picked up fairly fast. If there is a sequel in the works or an epilogue i look forward to seeing it.

Cel

This is a good story. Please continue. Harry and Hermione forever.

i haven't found one good hhr fiction like this one!

Absolutely fantastic. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Love always

Tamar

hey buddy, i like your style. its a realy good story, i hope you keep it going. i especialy liked the quotes, its a good touch, and i think gives the story something extra.

Great chapter, I like Hermione's thoughts.

Love always

Tamar

This was a great chapter.