| Reviews for She's Come Unraveled |
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   Ebony-Dove chapter 11 . 9/16/2016 Wow, burn. Might have to save that one for future reference! |
| Kagome chapter 4 . 8/6/2012 I love it, but in chapter 4, you typed ae pae pain instead of at the pain, near the bottom of the page. |
| bL00D pRINC3SS chapter 12 . 3/23/2012 Hmm ideas? Well it depends on how you want to go. I have some suggestions if you want to hear them. |
| Alltangledup95 chapter 12 . 8/28/2011 Please finish! This is really good! I think you should make Sarah pregnant. That would really stir the pot lol |
| britt121809 chapter 12 . 5/24/2010 very lovely story, dear! i'm thinking that you could maybe have a little more conflict between Stella and Sarah. Like, have Stella go up to Sarah and tell her some lie (made love to Jareth, ect.) and possibly go on from there. ALSO, I'm wondering, does Mina not like Stella? or does she like Sarah more? I was just wondering. I love how Sarah and Jareth's relationship has evolved since the beginning of the story. You have a very great plot line. keep on writing deary! I hope that I have helped some. :) |
| lonely 27 chapter 12 . 9/3/2009 finish the story |
| lonely 27 chapter 11 . 9/3/2009 great ch |
| lonely 27 chapter 10 . 9/3/2009 more |
| lonely 27 chapter 9 . 9/3/2009 great best yet |
| lonely 27 chapter 8 . 9/3/2009 and |
| lonely 27 chapter 7 . 9/2/2009 great ch. ilove it |
| lonely 27 chapter 6 . 9/2/2009 great ch |
| lonely 27 chapter 5 . 9/2/2009 next |
| lonely 27 chapter 4 . 9/2/2009 great ch |
| lonely 27 chapter 3 . 9/2/2009 loved it |
