Oh man, that one hit way too close to home! Great story, although right now I wanna ring Kim's neck. My older brother y sister did that a long time ago, and no matter how good her intentions were, Kim's leaving is gonna tear up her family y friends.

Great story - had me ballin' at the end. ~ tN!

Wow. This story was different than most of the stories I read here. You did a great job on this story, the plot went perfectly with the song, I could tell it took you a lot of time to write this story. I hope to see more of your work and hopefully a sequel to this one.

Aww it's so sad! I likey... Umm yeah peace

Lake XD

wait up! Hold on a sec! What are you THINKING! How could you do this?

She should take Ron with her!

Different type of story. Sounds like you really worked on this one. Sometimes you just have to walk away from a story and come back to it. You did well on this. The script matches the lyrics of the song well. The song could have been written for KP. Maybe a little OOC on Kim, but who am I to say. Expand the story, tell of her travels, try and bring her back to her family. Or let Ron go chasing after her. Lots of ways to develop this story further.

Poor Kim, that was really sad! I liked it alot, keep up the good work!