Ok, so I enjoyed this story until...the soul charm came into play. I feel like Hermione would never have put stock in such divination charms, especially she was rather sure of her feelings. It was also kinda like the charms were the reason everyone either got together or broke up...almost like no free will in the matter. That being said, I thought your writing was great, no major spelling or grammar issues. Overall, good just not my cup of tea after chapter 3.

Amazing story just read all of the chapters great work i loved it.

what the hell IS hand fasting? hm...doesnt really matter I guess. I'm too lazy to look it up in a dictionary :). Great story...it was really romantic and sweet and stuff :D.

Aww! I absolutely love the story, its in perfect character form!

I actually read this ages ago and somehow managed to not review...I don't know how! BUT I will tell you that I spent some time tracking it back down (asked around on a few HHr websites until some lovely person finally knew what I was talking about) and I'm so glad I did. I wanted my friend to read it, so I'm sending her your way and also adding this to my favorites list. Definitely hope to see more from you soon. I love the characters/ships in this and the way it was written...fantastic job!

*hugs*

Danielle

Very creatively written. Reminds me of when I was a young 'date apprentice', and all! I didn't realize you have such talent, Queen Spaz!

More, give me more! I want details!

O/G, another original pair! They seem so good together, I wonder why no one else really pairs them together. The end is so sweet; great story!

I love the idea of the soul charms, you have a wonderful imagination!

I love the proposal, it's just so sweet! I'm usually an H/Hr shipper, but I like the idea of O/Hr.

Great first chapter! I love the original pairing, not one you see too often!

As a huge Harry Potter fan I could hardly wait to read this story. Spaz is one of my nearest and dearest friends, and so talented, I knew it would nothing but a huge success.

The key to a good story is the ability to "lose" yourself in it, losing track of time or anything else around you. Spaz does that, for us the reader, with ease. I could picture all the scenes in the story as if I was not an outsider looking in but a integral member of the scene.

As the wedding unfolded I could almost smell the flowers and picture in my mind how beautiful the chruch looked. I could envision the first meeting between Oliver and Hermione as if I'd been standing right next to them both, and expierience the "butterflies" just as she did...

The twist the end was a perfect ending, to a perfect story, and I hope Spaz will grace us with many others in the future.

As an aspiring writer myself, she's motivated me to continue to improve my own works, she is absolutely incredible..

Thank you spaz for sharing something so wonderful with me, you are truly one of the most gifted writers I've ever come across...

With Love

Tenchie

This was fantastic! A couple of tiny grammar errors here and there, but so cute! I liked the first-person work, the fast pace, and the delightful outcomes for everyone, particularly Severus's final choice. Hee hee! Great job. :D

eew! a forty-eight year old pregnant?yuck! ah well thats life my grnadma had twelve kids lolol any way that was a really wonderful story i have to say. i hope you continue writing more stories!

aaww thats so sweet. i feel really bad for oliver. even though i love oliver/hermione fics, my #1 will always be

That was really good! I liked how "mysterious" this seemed. It was more realisitc then stories I normally read, which is definetely a good thing. Great job!

-Leah