I am 15 years late to the party, but darling, your story has drawn me in from the get go!
You are doing a splendid job and the next chapters I read, I read with anticipation!
You may or may not see this, but you go darling!
Let no one tell you otherwise! 3

i love you

I'm glad to find there's a Yautja/Human story that's rated T and still has romance in it. I was getting kinda tired reading all the same cliches on the M. Your story writing skills are over the roof! There's so much detail in the setting, the characters are amazing and felt very real, the action scenes are top notch. 32 chapters of awesomeness and each chapter isn't short at all! Which is how I like it.

There are some spelling mistakes like the "asus" and "term dogyterminology" etc. But they don't really affect the reading as the other issue, which is when the dialogues are mixed in with each other. On these parts, sometimes it was hard to tell who's the one talking unless there were yautja phrases in there. Just some advice. Good luck with future writing

You have to make a book 2

i have dyslexia... don't let enyone stop you.
Keep writhing.

Your story is amazing, hope your continuing.

LOVED THIS! amazing write and such a good read that I haven't stopped (its now past 5 am) sigh I really should be in bed by now but I couldn't stop! ) Never stop writing your amazing!

Hi I just want you to know I really enjoyed your story. Yes there were some grammatical errors but nothing so serious that I could not enjoy your writing. Look forward to reading more

Well this is gonna be fun

Hello. I have noticed you are using 'as' instead of 'us'. Us is referred to as a group you are in. And as is used in speach, e.g. As if I can do that.
Hopefully I didn't just make you look through your book to correct every single 'as' to 'us', this is just a "small" note I wanted to give. Hope it helped. Have a good day.

Omg this is the best yautja fanfic I'v ever read like seriously this is so cool! I love how Emma and Jeuki acts around eachother like its exactly what should happen if a human ever meets a of all I love every fighting scenes of this story, like how perfectly detailed it is and I'm just so amazed at how they fight in the yautja way.I don't know but,the ending made me thought that a sequel would be awesome :-) Anyways goodjob on making this story its so awesome and I just absolutely loved it 1,000,000,000/1,000,000,000 XD!

A rather enjoyable story. If anything, I kinda felt sorry for Emma. She kept ending up on her face alot in your story. I like how you left it open at the end, but didn't leave any major questions unanswered.

I was wondering about the grammar but he'll you're an amazing writer wish I could be commited to a story like you are keep writing I'm glad someone actually wrote a story where the chick isn't Sue Emma could make a good Ripley

I was so captivated by your story. I loved Emma and Jeuki, I loved the battle scenes, I loved the characters and their interactions with each other. You're very talented and I wish to see more of this story continued

From start to finish this was an amazing tale. I was unable to stop reading it, and even now that I've finished it I still want to continue reading it. I really enjoyed this new (to me) view on the Yautja.