More?

Amazing. The rhymes are incredibly good, and still manage to tell the tale. Love it.

what happened to this? wy didn't you finish? :(

That was so freaking cool! Poor legolas! Poor aragorn. Your work is stunning, well done for writing this! Have a smiley! :D

Update please! This emoness is going to have a good ending, i can tell.

more more more more more more more please!

great poem! you should turn this fic. i'll bet it would be good.

well you promised to update if theres a new reviewer rite? well im just s abit too lazy to even log in and sign this review but let me know when you update ok?

These poems are supposed to be in ann-thennath, right? If so, every line has a set number of syllables (eight syllables normally). Here's an example:

The leaves were long, the grass was green,

The hemlock-umbels tall and fair,

And in the glade a light was seen

Of stars in shadow shimmering.

Tinúviel was dancing there

To music of a pipe unseen,

And light of stars was in her hair,

And in her raiment glimmering.

Galu a teithad vain! (Good fortune and fair writing!)

Navaer Lalaith

i shouldn't really read stuff like this. it makes my eyeliner smudge cos of the state of near tearfulness. i love ur work. keep it up.

Meep, that was terribly angsty and sad .

BTW this is Kanitha ahaha.

Practically an epic poem, and well done at that. *Huggles Legolas* Nothing hurts worse than love denied, hmm?

So sad!

I like it!

Kiss