Please post the next chapter soon! I beg of you!

Omg plz continue this! It's such a deep story!

I hate finding stories that I read and fall in love with, only to find out they are unfinished and haven't been updated in years!

I love your story. I love the way you twisted all the characters to match this world, its awesome.

Please, Please, PLEASE update! I have to know what's in store next.

sincerely, your newest fan! 3

Uh oh _

Jakkie-boys going to met daddy...and Tornnie-boy wanted to get laid _

Good chp

Omg...you kill Vin, turn Sig into a ass, throw Jak into hell...NOW THIS! How dare you!

*Smirks* Great chapter...did NOT see that coming XD

O.O

EVIL PERSON! *Points* EVIL!

How could you EVER let Jak...Jak...*GROWLS!* I can't believe you 1st of all, make Sig into an ass, and 2nd of all have Jak falsely accused of KILLING Vin! *Points again* Evil I say, EVIL!

*Grunts and starts off to the next chapter, slamming the door* GOOD DAY SIR!

*Sniffles* Aww...I never did like people that made rumors, or for that fact, people that asked the people that the rumor was put on if it was true...bitchy little Tess -_-

*Sighs* Poor Jak. I would cry for him, but I'm still crying over Vin X3

NO! Why? WHY I ASK YOU? *Sobs over Vin's died body* WHY! T.T

Okay...enough of that *Sweat drops* I like Vin...he's so...geeky X3

I LOVE GEEKS DAMN IT! .

Heh...wait...*Just set in* o.o...O.O! Jak's sleeping with K-Krew? Okay..let me see if I got this right...1st you make Jak a slut, then you have him sleep around, then beat him by the hand of the fat man his self, fall in love with the man that, in the game, changes him for life, then you go off and have Krew have PECKER of all the people (And I did note you made him human) kill poor little Vin for sleeping with the great hero! Good Mar you're evil...I LOVE IT! This story rocks X3

"I won't leave. You haven't paid me yet" LMAO! That was a GREAT chp X3

please continue i wish to know what happens next

HOORAY! THE SEXIEST STORY IN THE WHOLE OF HAS UPDATED! Omigod, happiness... Do it again, please do it again! *ahem* Anyways, wasn't he king praxis before? Eh? Oh well, what do I know. Please please please update son!

I finally have reviewed. Update now, or else I'll never update and fluffy kittens will get blown up!

HAHAHAHA!

AJMS

*grabs machete and runs at Torn* OFF OFF! *Torn runs away or gets hacked to pieces either or...Varyssa returns*

Yay! so glad to have u back! have missed this story! cannot wait for the rest and for Erol and Jak to be reunited :) :) :) x

I finally found the time to review. Ouch I'm a super bad person. XD *heart* But you know I luvs yous!

I want plush pillows. O_o

And, sniff what about Jak! Erol, don't betray Jak! Even if Torn is right there acting all oddly cute. _

Jak's not a whore. He's just a... uh, uh slut. O_o XD

Torn's just jealous. XD I still feel bad for him though. Aww.

And I love Jak's attitude in the last part. He's gotta be testy after being in a cell for a couple days. XD

And you have to finish this chapter since you ended on CLIFFY! ZOMG CLIFFIES. O_

A nice, short chapter XD Yay Kels-chan!

NICE! _