ARGH! That was so cute!

I just loved the tickling part, who knew Hiei would do that? But it wasn't weird... I really, really loved it!

Write more okay? :p

I have to say I liked the word Lordess too. It seems to fit Mukuro. I will be reading the other story too, just so you are prepared for yet another review from me. I already like this story, and can't wait for the next chapter. It will be interesting to see Hiei's reaction to the battle with Shigure, and Kurama's to Hiei's with Mukuro. I do wonder what Kurama will think about Hiei removing the chains from Mukuro's arms, I am assuming that you have read or watched all of the series, so I wonder what you will have them both believe... well I am eagerly(I hope I spelled that right) awaiting the next chapter. Until then, ja ne!

Aw, cute and nicely done. Excellent job!

weird. Hmm, scenes... and lordess sounds more... powerful than lady, so I see the point. Scenes...hm... Hiei's fight with Mukuro? I'm being really predictable, although that's probably not too bad for me... anyway, I'll stop my rambling now.

cool..i hope u'll continue with this..

I love it. As for scene suggestions... *an hour later*... No clue. Update soon, please!

*cackles* nice~ and I don't even know the characters. _~ Mwha, love the discription and flow of it, and the slash was just prettyful. I kept looking over my shoulder to see if someone was reading it behind me. *shifty eyes* Well. It was worth the risk of the rest of Web design seeing it? *grins* nice stuff. Too bad Yu Yu Hakusho got you first, FMA could use your talent.

Wonder-bar writing. and yes. Lordess is a great word. Fie upon those who condem it for its lack of existance.

Um...could baroness be a better word than lordess? ...I'm pretty sure that is an actual word... Anyway...you started another story! It's good! Just like 'A well too deep.' -Which I shall now bug you to update. UPDATES PLEASE! _