aww thats such a cute ending loved it

nice lighthearted story

one piece of britpicking - there is no rank of Captain in British Police

Well i finally got around to reading this story, and i got to tell you its great..it was an awesome story, i loved it :D

i think that this story is awesome! i wonder what happened to Eric? Just to let you know, I noticed the same mistake 3 times...the word 'definitely'. You kept using the word 'defiantly'...they are two totally different words...just to give you a heads up :)

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OMG LOVE THIS STORY! A great ending to a great story!I love olivia's character, shes cute. Love the story, Love the prequel, AWesome 'series'!

~*TRIA MARIE VAL*~

Yay, good story! I really liked it. Everything is clear now and the story had a good ending. :)

Good Job. Please write another Harry Potter story, your really good at them.

~Jen

Why? Why Christine Lily? Woah, I thought this would be over soon but it looks like it's still going! THAT'S SO COOL! :D

~Jen

I am so glad Eric found his way out! This was a really good chapter! I can't wait for the next one. :)

~Jen

Oh my gosh! This is getting really exciting! Eric is so brave. This chapter is so good and now I can't wait for the next one! Please update soon! :D

~Jen

Wow, this reminds me of Harry Potter POA. Keep writing, i cant wait to find out what happens! i love your story. its so interesting. Great writing. Update ASAP!

Oh my gosh! Poor Eric! I bet it's Malfoy! I CANNOT wait for the next chapter! Please update soon! The suspense is killing me! This is so so so good!

~JEN

This is a reallt good chapter! I'm so glad you updated! It kinda took a while though. . . . .anyway really good chapter! Please update soon.

~JEN

Really good chapter! Please update soon! :D

~Jen

o! update asap! i love your story! i really want to know what happens! keep up the good work!