| Reviews for Deep Water |
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   TheHornyVirgin chapter 1 . 5/30/2009 NO! WHY DID YOU HAVE END THE STORY THERE! WHY? I want to see what happens to Charlie! Good story, though. |
| Shannon101 chapter 1 . 7/3/2006 #% $ YOU! LEAVING IT IN SUCH A PLACE! shame on you |
| GeorgiaRayne chapter 1 . 2/19/2006 Gah! Please write a sequel? I have to know what happens. I NEED ANSWERS! Ahem. Btw, I loved this quote: ""Pretty fishy. Here, pretty fishy, fishy. You know what would make you prettier, fishy? A nice slice of lemon and a Ritz Carlton. Hi-YAH!" Stab. Splash. Flail. Curse." LOL. |
| Pen Liddin chapter 1 . 11/29/2005 AH |
| Cat chapter 1 . 11/10/2005 well...I'm so not going near the ocean any time soon at all. That was just so creep. WOW! |
| Jaye Black chapter 1 . 9/13/2005 *shudders* Wow, it's amazing how far your writing range goes. I just read the one that you went "THIS IS CREEPY AS ELL!" on, the one where Charlie disappeared, and then I went to read more of your stuff...and I saw the Daddy Reflex, and I went "NO SODDING WAY!" It's really amazing how you can write adorable fluff, and then stuff that sends a chill down your spine hours afterwards. Keep up the good work! (*~!jayeblack!~*) |
| xoleanderx chapter 1 . 6/11/2005 Woah ... creepy, man. Really creepy ... *shivers* ... I think I'm gonna be staying out of the ocean for a while. Oh, that was so intense but brilliantly written, I could almost hear the "Jaws" music playing ... "duh DUH ... duh DUH ... duh DUH ... duh DUH, duh DUH, DUH DUH DUH DUH DUH DUH DUH DUH!" Eek. |
| mortaldarkness chapter 1 . 5/28/2005 As much as I love the ocean, I highly doubt that I'll be going in it much from now on. You made me afraid of whales, damnit. Bloody brillant. Keep on writing. |
| roadrunner010 chapter 1 . 5/15/2005 I loved it! Write more |
| SavvyPirateLove chapter 1 . 3/26/2005 ...O_O Whoa. That's creepy. Plain creepy. I think I might've developed a fear of the ocean just now. I've never been to the ocean before. I wonder what the thing was...a shark maybe? Eek...I don't think I want to think about that. Or what could've happened to Charlie...Okay I'm gonna go find some fluff to comfort me now. Great job writing this. Fantastically haunting. |
| Rachael-Raz chapter 1 . 3/12/2005 IEP! That one scared me, it did. Nice work there! Keep it up. |
| dustbunnie chapter 1 . 1/19/2005 ev-ol! but good. |
| gryffindorhobbit chapter 1 . 1/15/2005 ahh! i hate you! you killed charlie! ...but it was a good fic none the less. lol |
| arlewen chapter 1 . 1/5/2005 Well, I might be able to breathe again sometime in the next decade or so... How you alternate between such starkly different genres is beyond me, but you do it so well that I can't complain. And it's so REALISTIC - I feel the same emotions the characters are feeling. Now I think I'm scared of whales...quite an understandable fear. Fantastic stuff. New episode tonight! |
| ollahna chapter 1 . 12/31/2004 O.O! CHARLIIEE! You end it there? Nuu! It's so tense! I love it! Great story, though! Very well written. -cries- Charlie! Hmm... I must check out your other work! _ |
