| Reviews for Cereal |
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DGfleetfox chapter 1 . 6/9/2013 Oh that fluffiness of thee - I liked it very muchly :) |
Guest chapter 1 . 9/8/2012 soooo funny! |
creativesm75 chapter 1 . 11/30/2011 cool! hmmm...the cereals sound like good blend, actually... Harry: AUGH, WHAT! ME: sorry. but... my tastes are different. Harry: No way! |
hogwartsismydrug chapter 1 . 3/2/2010 yeah, potter, what about that squealing girl, again? *chortle* bhahahah win. |
NotAsAnxiousAs2009 chapter 1 . 6/25/2008 Short and funny. You're really talented at this one-shot thing :) |
xxTunstall Chickxx chapter 1 . 3/21/2008 Nice... Keep Writing, xxTunstall Chickxx |
Lord Cornwall chapter 1 . 8/14/2007 LOL! I bet Hermione would like it if Ron fell on her... HAHAHAHA! |
Amadea chapter 1 . 8/4/2006 Well, your profile says you want reviews. It's very frustrating when there are a gajillion hits on a story and very few reviews, I agree. You have a lot of reviews for this story, but whatever, I'll carry on anyway. First of all, I think it's a very cute idea. I noticed a few errors, especially near the beginning. The missing word: "He WAS absolutely fascinated with muggle cereals..." and instead of "ear" it should be "eat". I notice this fic is kind of old, so I don't know if you care... but, in my humble opinion, the ending could be stronger. Instead of "Harry shut his mouth and looked away." try for a punchier ending. Maybe just rephrasing that sentence would work. But it's a little weak right now. Overall, though, I liked it. |
AccountDead3445544w22e45 chapter 1 . 7/15/2006 Funny. I love Draco in this fic. |
Dracoginnylover24 chapter 1 . 7/10/2006 That was just to funny...lol ~:)~ |
xocrazililkelox chapter 1 . 6/29/2006 good story , it was funny |
MonMaskedAnge chapter 1 . 4/1/2006 That was one of the best oneshots ever written, great job! |
ladyerudite chapter 1 . 12/22/2005 subtle yet the impact was there... draco ginny greatness! coolness! :) |
account chapter 1 . 11/14/2005 lol brilliant! |
Purplereader chapter 1 . 10/29/2005 WHY are you so obsessed with Draco/Ginny? Shudder. All in all, that was cute, pointless, cute, pointless, cute, pointless, and adorable. And pointless. It's perfect! Yay! |