Amigo mío, me has dejado en suspenso. Me hace muchas suposiciones las palabras del dios que hablo con Kikyo.

poor girl update soon!

Beautiful

I loved it good job

*gives you a cookie* loved it!

lovely

Keep updating!_

Wow! 'tis a very good Onigumo/Kikyou ficcie! I thinks this is the only one tho...:( I lked the way u portrayed Onigumo. Not as a hearless rapist but a human being. ( Plz excuse the spelling mistakes if there are any:P )

O.O *tosses you the cookies* Write more & more & more! _

Wow this is story is so good..after all it is better that kikyou is with Onigumo(I think) well .. Have a cookie _ Great job!

Oh wow! This is going on my favorites list! I can't wait to read more! (definitly gives her a cookie... and chocolate machadamia nut cookie... m and quite possibly some pocky too!) Please keep writing!

Hmm...

So far this story is rather intriguing, and i really like the plot to it. Your finnaly advacning as a writer, and your stories seem to flow so much better. There are still a few minor nuances i have towards how choppy your story is, but it is getting much better as a whole.

Grammatically howeveer your story needs some work. There are multiple instances where you have the wrong letter inserted or phrase the sentence wrong. For example, in the letter form Onigumo, you wrote:

Meet me at tonight at the cave outside our village.

It should just be meet me tonight at the cave outside our village. Plus, if Onigumo is a traveling thief, shouldn't it be at the cave outside your village? Just asking. I know i'm being nitpicky, but don't think it means that i don't truly like this story. Your writing talents are improving immensly, your stories are getting longer, and this idea is truly original. Keep up the good work, and I'll check back on this story once you update again.

Associate of the Tan Paladin,

Ragnarok29

e_e ah damnit you remembered the cookie... *gives you a cookie* Nice job with the fic- its good to know not every fic on is about Inu and Kag. - good job

I liked this fic VERY much! please update soon! if ya do ill give you a cookie (?) - update?

This is going on my favs. and im adding you to my author alert (thing) so UPDATE!