She was not just given the random ability to swordfight! SHE IS REALISTIC HALLELUJAH!

Yay! Now I know this isn’t a Mary Sue story! She doesn’t like Legolas! HOORAY!

Woah. No Mary Sues here. Yikes. This story scares me.

Your chapter title is absolutely cruel

Ooookay...
I know we already talked about this, but this latest piece of disturbance seems much greater than the first. I mean, the sexual desecration of the CORPSE of a young teen? What the absolute heck did you watch as a kid, cause it clearly wasn't for your age range.

That said, it was still really well-written, permanently scarring, sleep-stealing horror.

I'm pretty sure all that food would have made her even more sick. Just as drinking too much water after being deprived could make her ill. Not to mention the fact that her stomach would have literally shrunk from going THREE days without sustenance.
I remember there was one time that I gotthe stomach bug, and didn't eat ANYTHING for over 24 hours except two ginger cookies. And the next day, I could only eat about a third of my usual portions, despite not actually feeling sick anymore.
Also, it might have been better to wait to give her anything to eat until dinner, that way she could have the stew, which would provide a few more nutrients than the bread, and wouldn't dry up her throat, or scratch her dry throat.

Note: Not a medic of any sort. Just experience.

Your desparation seems just a BIT premature Corbryn. Girl narrowly survived a death sentence, so, you should have a little more hope for yourself.

...I...I don't think I have ever read anything quite as absurd as Sauron the Wicked merely COMMENTING on something...
It could just be because its late and I'm tired, but that description struck me as hilarious...

I forgot to mention it last time, but thank you for the time jump. I was beginning to fear I would have to endure day by day writing for awhile longer! ;)

As for these last two updates…
Well, thanks, mate! Never gonna sleep again!

Well done with the exception of Lebryn.
How exactly does he swing atop a Warg whilst wielding a weapon (alliteration not intended) if he only has one arm?

I am not entirely sure we need ALL of this information. How many of these step by step chapters are there?

Nice job with the soup reference, but if Eowyn KNOWS that she is a bad cook, why would she have bothered in the Two Towers?

I flrgot to mention it earlier, but Sauruman only bred Uruk-kai, not Wargs. They existed long before the White Wizard failed, as evidenced by their aopearance in the Hobbit (book version).

I was wondering if she had made the connection…

Ahh! Grima the Worm!

Did…did she receive a vision?