Davner,

I know this will probably never get finished...but what the hell. Good work, man!

Update please! I want to read more, this is a great fanfic!

I must say that I am very impressed by this fanfiction. Great story, great characterazation. Lots of Jinnai in it which I love. However you write this one so well that I am actually intrested to hear what happens to the other characters as well...which dosn't often happen for me in reading an El Hazard fic. I really hope you continue it. I'll be waiting.

Keep going! There are too few really good fanfictions in existance for you to leave one unfinished...

Please?

maaaan, I love this story! I know I've reviewed before as someone else, but I gotta do it again! Please continue this!

Excellent story. It would be better if it was finished, but hey, who am I to complain? Keep up the good work.

Dammit, Davner, it's been too long since this worthy tale recieved an update! A complete original, this story has everything a good fanfic ought to, and it deserves to be written out to a conclusion! For the sake of good fanfic everywhere, please, keep working.

I gotta say, this is one of the best El Hazard fics that I've ever read..you've captured all of the characters neatly, even Jinnai and his henchmen. Keep it up! I'll be waiting for your next chapters!

Wow. Marvelous describes this first chapter very well, I believe. That warrior Bugrum is showing every indication of being a serious villain, and I'm finding myself already rooting for the heroes to defeat him. The characterizations of the other characters are wonderful as well. The idea of Makoto being Jinnai's defense is very amusing, and Jinnai's characterization is superb. You're doing a great job with Groucho as well. The idea about the origins of the Bugrum and the Roshtarians is very interesting and thought-provoking too. I've really enjoyed reading this and hope that Jinnai ends up somewhere on top again.

eeeeek! What happens to Jinnai? And Groucho! This is sooooooooooooooo good! Please please please continue it! ;_;

UPDATE PLEEEEAAAASSSSEEEEEE!

And once again, Dav shows his writing prowess. I, personally, didn't see any problems on this one technically, and it was a great read. Dav, I'm anxiously awaiting the next chapter.

Please write more, I really liked it.

Jinnai was more in character in this fic than he was in OAV2. As an avid (rabid) Katsuhiko Jinnai fan, this is EXACTLY the kind of El-Hazard fic that I want to read. The story is still so young that I can't say much about the plot, although I'm sure it's better than any of mine... I anxiously await the next installment! Hurry up, I need my fix!