Aw, now that is just TOO CUTE!

You know what's weird though? My favorite part of the story is the summary...it's odd, I know, but your wording, haha, it just literally made me roll my eyes, it was so classic James! So, great job with the characterization! Loved it!

~Runa )

*squeals* That was totally adorable! I love the timing and the characterization of the characters in the short story. you had a reason for Lily to start liking James, and not because he was a heartthrob and- *branches off into heartfelt, sob fetching, tear wrenching, over cliched version of L/J*- er, yeah. Anyways, completely Ah-Dor-Able job! Definitely a faves!

Cute

great!

LOL! I was laughing the whole way through this fic! Loved it lots! GREAT! TWO THUMBS UP! WELL DONE! lol... okay... maybe I liked it a little TOO much...? nah...! AWESOMENESESS! lol, i'm such a nerd.

aw... aw. aw..

ok

i'll stop.

it's a fortune that i've come to find this. a treasure. a golden ticket from a Wonka Bar!

haha.

good job. then.

i was going to put this in a different review, but after learning you could only put one response per chapter...

i'm going to put this here:

read this fanfiction. it is good:

Take Me To Your Heart

by Melancholic Orchid.

it's i believe three chapters so far, but it's good. Ann (the author) is a good friend of mine. and i am just trying to herd more reviewers to her story. It's good, i admit.

but whether you like it or not, review it!

lots of love,

Lauren.

So funny and such a cute ending!

This was really cute...:D...I loved it!

~Elise~

aw cute! i like it!

Okay i admit it that was very cute! You are a writing genius!

That was very good. :-) By the way, did you know CandyCaneLane is actually a place in Victoria BC my family used to go to every Christmas?

aw, thats cute i liked it!

How cute, indeed.

Cute.

Forever~FALLEN ANGEL

I agree, it was very cute.