heya ! wonderful story but i wish snape and harry interacted more they didn't address harry's problems even once ! I mean twice attempted suicide and no talking ? nevertheless this is one of my absolute favourite severitus fanfic ever !

This is the first fanfiction I have ever read. I actually loved it, albeit I think Harry excepted the knowledge of his heritage to easily. Bloody brilliant!

I ️ It

your story is really what i wished to read. Just one thing i would like to suggest... if you please change Harry's last name at the end of the scene in Great Hall when Dumbledore addressed him as Mr. Potter, not as Mr. Snape, then it will be more perfect i think. As everyone knew about their relationship, if Harry have demanded the official announcement, that would sound good & obviously Snape deserved that at least. Except this, i really admire your writting style and storyline, no fanfiction as perfectly satisfictory as yours i've ever read like this before. All the best.

The problem or issue that most of these fanfic were snape is Harry father is that they rush the bond for father or son. You can't just love someone who you thought was your most hated bully son right out of the blue. Even if it is a AU. That in my opinion is what kind ruin the fanfic. Like that you have courage to put your story for Critiques and comments.

. . . nope I change my mind this is my favorite chapter it was SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO sweet..Plzzz make a sequel

Oooo it's getting good hehe I honestly think this was my fav chapter *gets an evil look in eyes* *starts muttering to self*this is gonna be fun... Malfoy need to DIE! (I can't I would say that about someone..yikes! U have changed me HAHA no u haven't) but anyway great book so far

Cool :)

what kind of adult finds out a kid with bruises everywhere and leaves him there

Aww I'm sad it ended but I love how you ended it.

That was amazing one of the best fanfics I have ever read well done! :)

Aww, the ending gave me the warm fuzzies! This was really good, and it made perfect sense!

I'm really liking this fic, especially the dialogue, it just flows nicely.

Very angsty, but i think it was very realistic. Theres only so much a person can take in my opinion. Harry was still strong in your storyline, but he wasn't perfect. thanks for sharing :)

I really liked your story and the charms that hid his apearance seemed realistic, they weren't too out of character but i found draco to be a bit cruel. I also didn't liked how he kept almost death all the time. I mean yes he's the boy who lived but its not like he's ak proof or something. Other than that it was a good story, i liked the ending as it wasn't to cliche or anything, gl in writing other fics!