Nice story. Poor Chakotay... I hope he recovers soon, I think he will with the Captain to help him. *nods*

I hope you write more of ST-V I gotta go read "Trapped" now.

Thanks!

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A very good ending, I really like how you show the crew, especially Janeway, using their brains instead of just force to resolve the situation, also the interesting look at a very different culture and way of looking at things. And of course a very sweet scene there at the end.

This was great, I cant wait for a second chapter. It doesnt have to be as long, so long as we get something!

Didn't know you were going to post this - but I'm glad, the more who get to read it the better. Excellent story, with lots of action and suspense, and great plotting and characterization. I like the way you handled a more romantic relationship between Janeway and Chakotay, too. Great work!