Reviews for Two Children, Lost |
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![]() ![]() ![]() I hope that you'll pick up this story again (I know that I often return to stories after a long time, so I hope it's the same with you). I would really love to read more of this story. I rather like Ellisa and you've got me so curious whether there will be another chance for Erik and Ellisa after he loses Christine to Raoul. |
![]() ![]() Hi! I am a new reader here and I have to say that I fell in love with this story! You are a very good writer and I can't wait intill you update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You haven't updated in so long! What's wrong? I've been waiting, and waiting, and waiting but alas nothing! I love this story so much and you are making me cry with lack of updates! ;_; |
![]() ![]() ![]() O.. dilemmas. Can't wait to see where everything ends up! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay! Heating up! The chapter was the most exciting one. |
![]() ![]() Yus... I suppose I'm too obbessed... *cough*... Great job, once again! D I love how you can like... XD... err... explain it so good? *hits head* That's not what I meant... like you can detail it better than most stories! There! XD |
![]() ![]() ![]() O! Looks like it's really going to be exciting now! I can't wait! I love the way you write! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Bravo! Bravo! Bravissimo! XD Great! It's really wonderful, I love how she turned him soft. D Great job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hello! I'm sorry I forgot to review the last chapter! I very much like the way you characterize Erik. You write very nicely, however, I think you may be rushing the story a little bit. Keep going! Wonderful story! -Sasha |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's getting very exciting! I love this story so much! But with all the heart ake on the way it must have been a mearicall that he didn't kill himself beafor Christin got there. :( |
![]() ![]() ![]() I really like this story. your writing styl is good and Erik is actuallay acting like himself! |
![]() ![]() ![]() No matter how, but GO ON! You will do fine, as before. Sincere Greetings, awoman (Who would appreciate any critics on her story as well...) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well.. Ellisa definately needs to come back soon but.. give it a little time for Erik to get all moody and dark and vengeful n stuff. xx |
![]() ![]() Yes, continue...will Elissa's father, the real Erik, I mean, take her away from the Opera House after this incident, and then she will return years later, perhaps after the whole Christine thing? Anyways...UPDATE SOON! |
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