| Reviews for Until I Collapse |
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   Waves of Rage chapter 5 . 8/12/2012 Too bad I won't get to read what happens seeing as you last updated in 05 |
| IceQueen chapter 1 . 2/12/2007 It seems like your taking your personal feelings toward Trish out in this story. Don't get me wrong, it's very well written. Is it because Trish has had a pretty much perfect 7 years, while everyone has turned on Lita? Or perhaps it's because she put Lita in the sharp shooter to win the title for the 7th time. Oh well. Very good story. |
| Cody101 chapter 5 . 4/30/2006 do more do more pleas I need to no |
| MiChElLe05 chapter 5 . 11/28/2005 Love it. Can't wait to read some more! |
| Rocksbabigirl chapter 5 . 11/28/2005 Randy doesn't know when to give up does he? But poor Johnny Boy. Update Soon |
| Megan chapter 5 . 11/28/2005 Wow, that was a great chapter. I really enjoy reading this story and I hope that you'll be able to update as soon as possible. I'm really liking where this story is going so I commend you. You have some great writing skills, too. Can't wait to see the next one. |
| That One Apologue chapter 5 . 11/28/2005 *gasps* Randy actually got in? Lol, but poor John... He's jealous? And his timing - horrible. I know it wasn't his fault, but it's definetly not what it looks like. Ha, in fact it's the not even close! *shrugs* Or it could be *evil laugh* exactly what it appears to be. Hehe, can't wait to see what happens! Update soon! Please and thank you! |
| justagirl8225 chapter 5 . 11/28/2005 *bangs head on keyboard* I can't believe I'm going to say this but.. Damn it Randy! Ugh! How freakin' frustrating! But, I am happy to see this story updated.. Not so happy with what happened in said chapter, but.. anyway.. Please update soon or at least hold me over with a Lita/Cena one shot...pretty please? |
| lita2extreme chapter 4 . 7/30/2005 Ohh That is so good. Keep it up. I'm kinda liking Rady like this. |
| Rocksbabigirl chapter 4 . 7/21/2005 Randy kissing her neck would be heaven. Great chapter can't wait until the next one! |
| Myth chapter 4 . 7/21/2005 I'm so glad I found this! I love it so far, the interaction between John and Lita is great, it's very well written and their dialogue just seems to flow off each other's. Really funny! I like how their relationship seems to be slowly progressing, there's not much there yet but the build up will be worth it, I think. I really enjoyed reading about them arguing about ice-cream! And going out to lunch..Randy is an arse btw. You have his heel-ish tendencies down perfect. Ooh, and who's this mystery group/man that was watching them? I wonder..we shall see. Good work iaera, I'm looking forward to reading more! |
| That One Apologue chapter 4 . 7/20/2005 Well all I can say if I were her I'd say yes to Randy... He's fine... :D lol, anyhow UPDATE soon! I really like this story and have found myself quite 'attached' to it, if you catch my drift... Lol. ~Shadow Shawnna~ |
| That One Apologue chapter 3 . 7/20/2005 Interesting 'twist' shall I say... I bet John likes her! However, I'm not sure if she likes him... Well I guess that just means I have to read on, right? ~Shadow Shawnna~ |
| That One Apologue chapter 2 . 7/20/2005 Now I must ask why is this even a drama/angust story? It almost seems like a humor/romance story to me. Well I thought them acting that way was funny! I'm looking forward to reading more! ~Shadow Shawnna~ |
| justagirl8225 chapter 4 . 7/20/2005 Oh man, the beginning of this chapter was great of course. Loving the interaction between Lita and John (which you probably knew..) Hm, Randy being an asshole eh? *shakes head* Although.. well, I won't finish that thought, *chuckles nervously* Anywho.. Nice update for this fic and I can't tell you how much I was waiting for it :-) |
