Too short! ( awww

Loved the Serenity and Seto part!

I really, really loved this! I kind of wish I would of read this fic before I wrote mine because it seems strangely reminscent of this. I hope that they aren't too similiar! Anyway I enjoyed this a lot and i hope that you continue writing!

hey you; come back to writing, you've got talent girl so don't waste it and enrish this deserted fandom with stories of this awsome couple.

beautiful!

That was so cute! Nice job on this story!

Great story!

There are few stories on that have met my expectations...you surpassed them. I absolutely loved this story! Though if I take a closer look, which I am sure that later on I will, the settings, the scene, it was all completely ordinary. This is not the first story I have come by where a girl gets splashed by a car, and in the end something surprising happens, and I am sure it's not the last. But what sets your story appart from the throng of others? Language. Grammar. Style. Though I am sure that I'm perhaps 3 years too late for a review, oh well. This story is spectacular. Ten thumbs up! lol! Hope to see more works of similar degrees from you! Truly amazing!

good job. don't you think it deserves to be extended

One of the best one-shots I've ever read. Keep up the good work

Oh god I think I'm gunna cry. That was so sweet. I'm going to have to read this again on Chiristmas.

positively great story, u r an awesome writer.

LOVED IT. i think i should have been a long story. why did it have to be a one shot. it was soo so so so so so GOOD. to bad i can't look forward to a second chapter. well. still loved it. (smiling uncontroubly)

that's it? it seem incomplete somehow.

this was such a cute story Bravo

interesting...