Great story.

Aws

that almost made me cry. :'(

it was very good

While the idea of the fic made me cringe at the onset, the story itself is gorgeously executed. The dialogue is very free and warm without making the elves sound less majestic than Tolkien intended. The plot is rendered almost flawlessly.

You've left a little hole in my heart. It's not often that I say that now to anyone, least of all an author. Beautifully done indeed.

Aw! Very cute

As always, you are good at conveying emotions. Your somewhat sparse style sits well with me, as it leaves more room for imagination.

I am not so much complaining as ... maybe it is just wishful thinking. But you really should google for Laws and Customs of the Eldar to find out what Tolkien himself wrote about Elves. Most important bits are online. You write a decent AU, but keeping a bit closer to canon (in basic matters: maturing, society etc; you do well enough with timeline and geography) would be even better. Really, so much drama can be milked from breaking those laws and customs. ;-)

Best for you.

Thank you for sharing this with us. It's a sad little story, but tender for all of that. Good use of dialog and sparce visual descriptions.

I'd like to hear that song. I don't believe I've ever had.

That's cool, to see the first 'draft' of Imperfect. I take it that elrohir here is the one to give birth? Interesting...