This is one of the better studies of Fllay I've come across. The idea of her as some sort of mad secret-keeper is fascinating, and you handle it well.

The one aspect of the story I'd call into question is that the prose is somewhat purple; you tend to use more flowery language than I'd prefer. This could just be personal preference.

Wow, I like this very much. It is so rare to find any good introspective fics in this genre, and it's even rarer to find ones concerning Flay. Not to mention how original the premise is. Anyway, very well done. I enjoyed this immensely.

Great fic on Fllay. I admit I used to hate her character at the start of the series, but now I've really grown to love her character. She's the most complex character on the show and actually develops by the end of the series. It's not often I see fics that really give Fllay some justice.

I love this fic! Even though I don't like Fllay that much, I appreciate her character because it takes a lot of brains to understand her. And I do. I'm glad that someone else appreciates the mwu/maryu/nataru pairing because I love it so much! It's just so twisted and...Anyway, have you ever thought that Maryu would like Nataru just a little bit? Okay, maybe a LOT.:)But don't even bother thinking that Mwu and Natarle like each other. NEVER. I'd like to talk/write to you so can you please email me about your thoughts of that threesome or even Fllay?My email address is nakamura0michiyo

i do not really mind it having no plot, i like the story the way it is and at least there are people like you who don't want to make fllay so unwanted but instead a little sneaky ... the story was interesting ya know ... good luck on your next fic..._

Wow, great fanfic! Very well written!

Wow, although I don't like Fllay this fic is good.

This is an absolutly wonderful piece.

A deeper look not just into Flay, but everyone around her.

Your writing flows very well and truly enjoyed it.

This is very werid, but for some reason I couldn't stop reading it. It was pretty good though. The way you wrote it just it very... I'm not sure what to call it, but it's a good thing of ran author to have.