The last one should be like a girl who was in love with Harry but he denies her for Ginny and so she goes after Ron who is with Hermione and then Draco who decides to unite with the Trio just this once to get rid of this nuisance to all things canon. And the Sorting Hat is just like "Pick a house you aren't going to listen anyway" and everything goes wrong for her and that would be so satisfying.

OMG, that was hilarious! (down with the Mary-Sues! muahaha!)

"Oh darn those SlytherinS! Don't they know that I'm a lactose intolerant"

"What does tomatoes have to do with lactose"

"Um duh! LocATOSE and tomATOES! see the similarities" Marissa yelled.

OKAY THIS IS JUST ABOUT THE FUNNIEST THING EVER.

YOU ARE GOD!

I love it.

The second chapter was LMFAO-worthy.

luv, Buffy

excuse me. Update or I will be forced to cry. I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH!

"Run Ginny Run! It's the only thing that can save you" Ron yelled.

HAHAHAHA.

as my dear ron would say, just bloody brilliant.

Okay, I already reviewed this story, but I bow to it and worship it, so you must write more right now, I command you.

"Don't say that word"

"What word? Family?"

"DON'T REPEAT THAT WORD EVER AGAIN!"

This story makes me laugh so much I almost pee. Just so you know.

Oh, yeah! Liked this one a lot better than the first I'd say she was damn CRAZY! and it's a good thing she's gone I really hated her.

On to chapter three...

I don't know what to say, yes I liked it as a parady-though there were some sections that weren't very parody-like. I also hope that "suethors" don't blasphame the concept of the dark OC like that-I mean accept for several of the more ridiculous plot points the parodied elements and better characterization-that story could have been lifted out of Mary-Suedom. I would be more than happy to take it off your hands-yes I know it's a parody-but still it could be so good. And also it's probably best to stick a dark OC like Lillith in the Marauder time period. Yeah, I could go into all the revisions I'd love to make, but then this review would be too long. *sigh*

As for the parodied elements I got a good laugh out of the nick-name thing, "everybody hates me" concept (which can be believable with good writing), and Lillith falling into a Pit of Doom, that was funny. Hope she doesn't come out of it-or if she does that she'd be un-Mary-Sued.

p.s. curse the Sue-authors who DARE to attempt to write deep-minded dark OCs and thus ruin them by making them well-refer to some of the lighter parody elements of Lillith's characterization...:D

But seriously with some more characterization and the removal of all of the parody-elements that would be a very good OC-centric fic.

excuse me, but add more or I'll be mad. V funny.

I LOVE IT WRITE MORE! Mary Sues should die.

Ah, I hate Marissa so very much, so this is a double pleasure.

Wow, that was fantastic. Seriously. I think I lost brain cells with Marissa's dialogue, though. Next, you should have the plain, "Perfect"-In-Every-Way Sue.

Rofl, hilariosity. Down with the Sues!