Huzzah for the Doctor! Very well-balanced, everyone got their moment. Kudos.

:D That was just plain fun.

AL

I really liked the characterizations of everybody, I could almost hear them talking outloud. I could see the scenes really well too, and Mal's solution seemed like something he'd do.

[Mal laughed, a smile of fond reminiscing on his face. ‘Stopping everyone from killing each other is one of the biggest parts of my job really.’

‘I thought that was the getting shot and punching people in the face part’]

It's so true, so true.

This bit: [It seemed ludicrous that the doctor would even dare to think about screaming at the mercenary, but Simon was nothing if not inappropriately brave and completely without common sense. Especially when it had something to do with his little sister.] seemed very in character to me. Hooray for Simon and River! And everyone else on the boat!

Arrghh. One shots are so frustrating... this is really good, and like the series I'm sorry to see it end. WRITE MORE SOON!