| Reviews for The Sum Is Greater |
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Millie-dragon chapter 1 . 3/9/2005 Great idea! It's nice to see a David-based fic. |
Pheo chapter 1 . 1/17/2005 Just beautiful! And about time for David, too! We would surely miss him, though! The flow of their budding relationship fell very smoothly with the way David lives already. Very well done. |
LovinCSI chapter 1 . 12/21/2004 aww - i love david! great story - as always your writing is a delight to read. |
smrozier chapter 1 . 12/21/2004 Aw, so sweet. David is a great guy. :) |
MirrorKate chapter 1 . 12/20/2004 Aww. *melts* It ended a little abruptly, though; the wedding proposal when we don't know the characters and don't yet really have a reason to care. It would have been better if you'd ended it after he suggested that they could make it work. I enjoyed it, though. |
And Also With You chapter 1 . 12/20/2004 Exquisite writing. Just beautiful. I wish I had something useful to say. Nice job exploring an underused character. |