Awesome POV. I love that scene and you've captured it well in this fic. Oriya is one of my favorite characters and he deserves more fics dedicated to him. Thanks for sharing.

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"This time his enemy has honour and integrity and the kind of darkness that Hisoka can understand."

This, I love. It sums up the similarities that Hisoka and Oriya have and how strong are other ties such as respect can be, plus shows a different growth for Hisoka. Kudos.

Nice reflective piece ) I like the message. I think the paragraph about Tsuzuki (para. 3-4) is rather distracting from the main theme, though ("quick thoughts" about Tsuzuki like the one in para. 7 may be better), but that's minor.

very shiny

we like it a lot

write more soon, ne?

oriya rocks