Great job on the story, it was awesom, keep up the great work and keep on writing. thanks

This story made no sense in the end! Naruto's still gonna die, Itachi's still alive and who the fuck was Konran?

Dam such a sad story with a devastating ending as well!

But what about Naruto being sick? What do they do? How do they all handle it? I want more! Haha this was a good story. Poor little Naruto. Orochimaru is a creeper. I enjoyed reading this. Naruto and Sasuke are cute together. I wish there was more! I would totally keep reading. :P

-Yvonne

omg I love this story but I simply can't finish it at the moment I will come back to it tho promise

This fic was 100% pure wangst. I finished it just to finish it because I'd already started reading it, but the plot was garbage and the characters were so unlikeable. To add insult to injury, the ending was totally rushed. Throwing in a surprise, lethal heart condition at the last minute was such a joke. An even bigger joke is that your MC is going to die in less than a year, yet you're calling this a happy ending because the characters were sort of happy-ish in the last two paragraphs. No justice was served to Itachi, Sasuke is going to be alone again in less than a year, and Naruto went through all of that just to end up dying anyway. Complete trash fic.

*_* this story is like oh my god... I feel pity towards Naruto.. :( what a hard life he had.. but Neji too, he only appeared when Naru was still inside Gatou's house..

Fuck you for making me cry!

Heyyyy...yeah i know its been a few years since you posted this but i just wanted to let you know that this is the best fanfic i have ever read. I will always remember this fic and you for this wonderful time. I have also checked out some of your other fanfics and i can proudly say they are just as amazing. But i have just one small request regrading to this fanfic. What happened to Naruto's disease? I dont wanna be a happy ending spoiler or anything but it just kept me wondering. Anyways i really hope you are able to see this review( even though it may be a few years...hehe) Thank you for making this fanfic. Kudos to you! 3

I like it! But that damn sasuke...he is pissing me off -_-

So, what happened with Naruto's illness? I mean, no longer than a year, right?

I don't get it he only got shot in the shoulder he shouldn't even be in this bad of a shape.

This is a great story. It's very depressing though, which is why I'm glad it has a happy ending. The only thing I can think of that would make it better is if Sasuke started a business for cure research on Naruto's disease. Thanks for finishing it.

Nyc ending although I ( and some would probably agree with me) would have prefered it continued, sigh, ahh well i guess beggers can't be choosers

Lol that song! Talk about flash back Thursday! XD