i love the chapter update soon!

Yet again another well writen chapter. I'm extremely happy you've decided to update but a bit disappointed at the chapter's short length. n.n Oh well... Lol. Guess beggers can't be choosers right? Oh. And about your a/n at the begining of the story. I don't know your age so I don't know your generation, but I agree. I know I'm not the best writer, but it is extremely hard to find a good story. Well good luck in your searchers, your school work, and your updates. Looking forward to them.

This seems interesting so far... I was asked to check this story out and I have to say you have an intrigueing start...

~*Duchess

I finally finished it. Lol. And have decided to add you to my Favorite Stories list and my Author Alert list so I can tell when you've updated your story. n.n Hope you don't mind my random reviews. Lol. And the length of the chapters don't matter to me as long as you get your point across in that certain chapter. Lol. Update soon!

Well my complaint/question was answered for me. Lol. 'Like Inuyasha but 10x hotter and creepier' eh? Lol. Now my imagination is running wild. XD Well just wanted to let you know that I think this story is pretty out pretty cool. I'm off to read the last 2 chapters you have posted. Bye for now.

I'm back! Lol. And Chapter 4's first A/N made me laugh. I was eating McDonalds when I read it. Lol. Burgers are good... and chocolate is good. Lol. Anyways. These two chapters were pretty nifty. Everything is starting to come together now. Though I wish you would have described Techbu's looks a bit deeper so I could picture him as I do the other characters, but I'm slowly putting him together piece by piece. Lol. And pissing people off is good, so the sequel idea is cool since I like your writing. Lol. I'm off to read more.

Hey there. I must admit, your summary is what drew me into your story but once I read the first chapter I had to know more. n.n Lol. This may sound stupid to you, but I only review on stories that are worth my time and/or I would recommend to others. And as far as this story goes so far I would surely recommend this story. I also believe the author has a right to know if other people think their story is good or not, just as I would want to know. Lol. But anyways. I really like your story so far and plan on reading even more. Just wanted to let you know what I thought and tell you I will review a bit more into the story. If I get interested I'll also add you to my Author Alert list and Favorite Stories list. Lol. Well keep up the good work. Later!

its really good so far you should keep it up ok i cant wait to read wha happens next im not sure if there should be a sequle or not i will have to read more of the story but a sequle does sound good keep it up and up date soon ok well thanks for a good story so far;)

Hey, I like it, very interesting plot, Well written, and it keeps the attention of the reader. Definately a step above the mundane I/K Stories out there. I'll be watching for the next chapter with great anticipation.

WahT_T i dont wanna die WahT_T

my my my what a great fic you have my boy lolz

Yay for Inuyasha

thiis chappy is the best so far i love the story line yay :) O_o

dude this fic is the shit (best0

keep it goin

Sessy-And-Rin

wha T_T inuyashas crying *sniffles*

good fic kid keep it goin

p.s. i try to review every chapter so thats why ya...have lots of reviews form me

whe O_o

lolz i was menyioned at the whoo me still a very good fic keep goin

This story is great! Half a year has really pumped your brain! This is one of your best stories yet, it held my attention to the end!:D