You must write more of this story soon. It is getting so good I can't wait to see what happens.

wow, I love your story, It is very creative. I am only on ch. 6, but I know I am going to finish it tonight. It is amazing how creative you have made your story, it isn't like those other stories that are identical to one another.

update! No Romance yet?

So Kanaye is Sasuke?

Lovely. I'm enjoying this story. I especially like the way you're weaving together snippets of what happened in the past with the present. Such a teaser. Also, I'm enjoying the character interactions as well. I'm a bit curious to find out how the story will pull together (these all seem an awful lot like exposition), but that's not necessarily a bad thing. Looking forward to how you resolve it.

OMG! THIS IS AWESOME! I was actually there for this story since chapter one. o.o but i got sad because Hinata was alone and stopped reading it until i saw ALL these reviews so i checked it agian and i thought there was no one again so I felt sad. But now I'm reading it and now it all makes sense to me! And Temari should appear soon right? She IS dead as it says. MAke her appear soon and hope you update! I'm making this as fav. stories! :D

gyah! (there were more h's in that yell bfore)

update update!

XD

and i saw that this is naruhina narusaku and only a maybe sasuhina...please please please be naruhina somehow...i nearly cried when hinata told kanaye about naruto, and i'm sure others have noticed the familiarity of her daughter's name...Nariko...

poor akerou...

update soon, yeah?

omg! such a good chappie! and gaara...POOR GAARA...plz update soon! i HAVE to find out what happens!

O_O cliffy...update soon

Oh! This is neat! Very neat indeed! It would be pretty much awesome if you updated soon!

Wow.

I love everything: characterization, writing style, even the flashbacks that I find seriously annoying. Usually I don't like when most of the plot is told in flashback, but this is definitely an exception. I just think your present day plot isn't moving fast enough. Maybe add some foreshadowing? Still, I'm really excited to see what happens between the characters as the story progresses, especially to see how the pairings will change or develop.

Hinata, Kanaye, and Akina/Sakura are portrayed wonderfully. I can't wait to see more Caden- I like how you've been able to connect the foreign exchange student thing to Naruto's situation back in Konoha.

Well, I thought Kanaye was Sasuke for a little while, but because of how he argues with Akina, I'm not sure. If he isn't, I'd like to see a character for Sasuke. I always notice that in many AU Narusaku fics Sasuke seems conspicously absent, which can't be right since they all became friends at around the same time. (Happens in AU Sasusaku and Narusasu too.)

Look at my huge review! I criticize WAY better than I write. BTW, I'm taking your recommendation for T. . I just read the first part of The Waste Land and it went straight over my head, so I'm off to try again.

*that* was worth waiting for . . .

waah! no, not a cliffhanger! oh well...ok, i'll do what u said and wait... even though the suspense is killing me! anyways, nice chapter, and update soon!

You go girl! Uh huh. I love this story. I think I'll recommend it! What do you think?

Also, if yuo've read The Theif Lord, do read my new fanfiction 'Pigeons'. It's an oddly twisted story of voodoo, merry go rounds, and of the pigeon invasion!

thank you for updating! update more! hehehe